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    dots Submission Name: Growing Apart...dots

    Author: nobody6
    ASL Info:    14 female peace river ab
    Elite Ratio:    2.82 - 26/29/8
    Words: 122
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       i dunno what i was feeling my friend was being a dink and it hurt.

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    dotsGrowing Apart...dots

    Face the facts
    Stop overreacting
    It was bound to happen
    Sooner or later
    Whether you like it or not
    You should have know from the beginning
    Forever is not always forever
    Fate is unpredictable
    It has brought us together
    Now itís splitting us apart
    Ideas changed and so did we
    Maybe we will befriend again in the future
    Though I cannot promise that it is near
    Endings might be tragic
    However the beginning will never be forgotten
    Iím sorry it had to come to this
    You really need to understand
    I never really meant the things I said
    Itís just the process of growing apart
    In no way easy
    It truly hurts the heart

    Submitted on 2005-07-18 00:04:35     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      nice. what's a dink? ur friend must have been a pretty big [censored] 2 piss u off this much. keep writing and i look forward 2 reading more submissions.
    | Posted on 2005-07-18 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]
      Ideas changed and so did we

    i love that line / it means more then we (or most people) could ever know or come to understand ... the line is very insightful ../. really brings an image to the readers mind.
    good job. keep it up
    J W I
    | Posted on 2005-07-18 00:00:00 | by J W I | [ Reply to This ]
      wow if this was shown to your friend man that was harsh. but it was good though. friends do change. and im slowly facing that with one of my good ones and its not easy. and lots of others can relate too. but i understand when u write and ur mad that u think it wont be that good so u want to basht it. anyways good job!

    | Posted on 2005-07-18 00:00:00 | by Day DreaMeR | [ Reply to This ]
      you want me to bash this? i love this, i can't bash it. wait, maybe i misunderstood what bash meant. this poem kicks ass. i can relate alot to it, i'm sure alot of people can. keep writing and stop telling people to bash your awesome work. either love it or let it be, never bash.
    | Posted on 2005-07-18 00:00:00 | by lethargic_me | [ Reply to This ]

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