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    dots Submission Name: The Beach of Contemplationdots

    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 103
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nature
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       Sitting on the river's edge and doing what I oft do - becoming one with Great Spirit's natural spiritual environment.

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    dotsThe Beach of Contemplationdots

    I meditated on the beach
    of contemplation
    free of time and space; of
    humanity's condemnation.

    At one with the river, rocks
    and trees
    ulocking mind's doors, yet
    lacking keys...

    One soul's reflected
    All in 1; true

    Infinite voices spoke without
    a word ~
    Throughout my being I listened
    and heard:

    A song of beauty and of
    A timeless tune from up

    And as I floated oh so
    I awakend to that gifted
    to me:

    Like a flower which had bloomed
    and died
    Life is but a mundane

    Submitted on 2005-07-18 14:31:57     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Well where is the guide to this beach, becuase i think i need a trip lol. Anyway great job it was very well written. I could see a peacefull place in the corner of my mind thanks to this poem.I thank you for writing it.
    | Posted on 2005-07-18 00:00:00 | by Hesitation | [ Reply to This ]
      hey how have you been i like your post very peaceful
    reminded me of my home town in northern ontario canada
    the imagery was of great serenity
    very nice and relaxing
    | Posted on 2005-07-18 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]

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