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    dots Submission Name: One-way to Oregondots
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    Author: Emma_closes
    ASL Info:    15/f/fl
    Elite Ratio:    4.28 - 88/111/44
    Words: 149
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 300
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1092



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       Just some thoughts that have been ringing through my mind these past few weeks. Just thoughts of Oregon and places that I've never even seen.


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    dotsOne-way to Oregondots
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    She carries conversations
    like a tissue in her purse.
    She's someone different every time
    and pretends it's versatility.
    But it's always on her mind,
    that she's never been to Oregon
    or seen the golden gate
    and she'll prob'ly never see all 50 states.
    Because she's living in a world
    that revolves around a stereo
    and four inconstant walls,
    a different room for every month
    'till versatility calls.
    And there are four new chunks of plaster
    for her to call her own
    that collect the constant ringing
    of the unattended telephone.
    And she'll still stare out the window
    of every broken home
    and smile at the sunset
    then realize that she's alone.
    Still the ending is a sad one,
    as it is in every poem.
    And she'll still be reflecting
    when the sun comes up,
    she'll still persist to wonder
    "how much will be enough?"
    for a one-way greyhound bus.




    Submitted on 2005-07-18 18:42:54     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I'm suprised not many people have commented or read this piece for that matter. Excellent write.

    that she's never been to Oregon
    or seen the golden gate
    and she'll prob'ly never see all 50 states.
    Because she's living in a world
    that revolves around a stereo
    and four inconstant walls,
    a different room for every month
    'till versatility calls.

    great little bit expessially living in a world that revolces around a stereo and four inconstant walls, (peronally I think inconsitant would be alot better, smoother.)

    that collect the constant ringing
    of the unattended telephone.

    a great little two parter that says a hell of alot.

    Then what wrapps this piece of brillantly

    "how much will be enough?"
    for a one-way greyhound bus.

    as it can mean quite a few different things, money which of course would seem a little artifical reasons, but the absolutely getting fed up with everything and get me a [censored] bus
    is what it says to me.

    Beautiful poem.

    Ryan B. Wilbur
    | Posted on 2005-07-18 00:00:00 | by 27_deadpoets | [ Reply to This ]



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