This poem has very good imagery and they way you mixed fireflies with cameras was nice. I don't think I will look at them the same way again. This makes you see that if you imagine something it can be true even if its just for a moment. I like it.
It's cool. It's not so much a movie star as a fairy star or something because you use nature to describe the surroundings so it sorta reminds me of a fairy or a dryad or something... The description makes it pretty and sweet to the soul, it's nice to read. Peaceful and hopeful I guess. I'm not sure if you meant moonlit or moonlight on the second line but you should fix that... that's all I can see wrong with it, Oh and it's a really pretty title and it's perfect! Laura-Grace
what a sweet eloquent piece...certainly not what I was expecting...yet so much more! From your titile to the last flowing line this was just fabulous! It read like a soft breeze gentle caressing the readers muse. Well done!
I haven't read a post here in literally about a month...what a wonderful piece to welcome myself back with!
This is pretty. The imagery is great, and so is everything else about it. Excellent wording. And who says you can't be a movie star? You never know what could happen. Do what you want, you're only living once. Anywho, I like it a lot. Great job