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    dots Submission Name: Still Staring at My Chestdots
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    Author: gavinspikenard
    ASL Info:    20-something/m/USA
    Elite Ratio:    2.85 - 273/334/104
    Words: 85
    Class/Type: Rant/Angst
    Total Views: 435
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    dotsStill Staring at My Chestdots
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    Greetings Mr. Tunnelvision
    Yeah, I seem to be an attractive young woman
    Whoop-dee-doo, it's nothing new
    Look at me when I'm talking to you...
    ...in the EYES moron! *Sigh* this is very unfair
    Are you aiming to make me hate an appearance?
    I don't want you to be impressed by me
    Scary, sad, awkward, suspicious
    I'm not interested (despite how much you think I am)
    A fine line between appropriate admiration
    and animalistic lusting
    Maybe you should cover up that salivation...
    ...with this restraining order!




    Submitted on 2005-07-18 23:34:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      haha!
    i am the proud owner of a coupla tops that ummm... are pretty rude to boys who cant maintain eye contact...
    it frustrates the crap outta me lol.

    this is great.
    i like how you take the chics perspective on this one... yup... step into her shoes for a second and live out the frustration.

    haha... i really have nothing constructive to say about this piece...
    good on you!
    | Posted on 2006-10-11 00:00:00 | by Someones Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
      Hell i thin tis funny when ur talkin to a guy and their all starrin at ur boobs, this was kool! when guys dothat i just sit there and wait for them to bwe done, i mean guys need their time to look at some tits, i mean its gets boing seeing the same tits in a porn move, i get bored of it, but i dont stare at chics boobs tho. lol! this was kool! i liked it!
    I Sta Ru,
    Amber
    -suicidalchld51-
    | Posted on 2005-07-19 00:00:00 | by Suicidalchild51 | [ Reply to This ]
      Cool poem. I like how you wrote it from the [censored] perspective. Some girls tend to get all upady and on your case like you aren't a man that obviously has animalistic needs, and/or instincts. Like Prince says," let a woman be a woman, and a man be a man" Yeah, Rock N' Roll!
    | Posted on 2005-07-18 00:00:00 | by Ratmeat | [ Reply to This ]
      LOL. This is definitely going on my favorites list! I've never met a guy who realizes how rude staring at a woman's boobs while talking to her can be. :) Well done!
    | Posted on 2005-08-25 00:00:00 | by Maverique | [ Reply to This ]



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