Something to Relate to
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I'm winging it, don't pay attention on how bad I do, just relate in real life how awful this and you can be. :)
Something to Relate to
I see China, You see France, can you see My underpants? Does Diet Coke help you lose pounds? I know it doesn't because it ain't killing me, or is it? Blah...meh...go...ahead...and...make...fun...of...this May I can't write but can you? It's the fingers who do the working not you? Do Monkeys fly at all? or Pigs? What's wrong with the world? A girl picks up a wine bottle and debates to smash the bottle against the dudes head or serve it, which one will she do? By the way, is there any right or wrong to this question? Or this one? or that one? We kill each other in real life, turn on a TV or how bout going outside and so on. I like cursing, or do I not, that's the fight between good and evil...and the monkeys Can you die without dieing? Do I make sense? Good-bye and rate how crappy this crap is, crap crappety, crappy, craptapulous...ect. |
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I like it, I don't what about it exactly but something about makes me open my eyes thank you for writing it| | Posted on 2010-03-22 00:00:00 | by Gjay | [ Reply to This ] | lol best 1 yet lol! u r super hilarious!!! love it! | | Posted on 2009-07-11 00:00:00 | by ShadowGaze | [ Reply to This ] | I liked making since out of it. I think eveything in this had a purpose. Even the writing itself. Very Self-explainitory Finn, and a nice job at that. Even though it is funny I didn't laugh at all. Not trying to offend anyone here, or you. I think that it really came clear to me. Random, but you have a point of making fun of this. This, being, a funny poem to me, made me feel worse and better. Careless, but I sence anger? I don't know why....I just see that in this piece. Bye! :) | ~Sunnehbabe | Posted on 2009-02-05 00:00:00 | by Sunnehbabe | [ Reply to This ] | Whoa. I don't know why you thought that this was stupid. I found it to be quite hilarious. Keep writing! | Duv O.Y. you live in IL? | Posted on 2008-02-22 00:00:00 | by Draumrkopa | [ Reply to This ] | Omfg! This is awesome! I can't stop laughing. Seriously. This is so different from the others. I LOVE it. | I started laughing from the very first line. I was like "What the hell?" Then it went on and then I'm like...."What the hell?" And I couldn't stop laughing. And Finny, this does make sense...to me. It means that THE WORLD IS GOING TO END IN FIVE YEARS AND EVERYBODY WILL STILL BE LIVING BUT THEY'LL HAVE TO EAT DRUNKEN SHROOMS EVERYDAY FOR THE REST OF THEIR LIVES!!!! -Beth | Posted on 2007-10-27 00:00:00 | by crimson_panda | [ Reply to This ] | I see your underpants and they are MINE. | I can tell they're my underpants cause they're just DIVINE. With lace and bows and hobo's toes In our underpants we'll have a good time. Nice randomness, Finn. :D | Posted on 2007-05-19 00:00:00 | by purplefae | [ Reply to This ] | I see China, You see France, can you see My underpants? | - This matters not, because I'd rather not see your underpants. No, I don't see france. Does Diet Coke help you lose pounds? I know it doesn't because it ain't killing me, or is it? -Diet coke, probably kills. If not, it's not gaining you as much weight. That might kill you though. Blah...meh...go...ahead...and...make...fun...of...this -Hey, look at that kid! he said "meh!" GET HIM! May I can't write but can you? It's the fingers who do the working not you? -No, my fingers don't do all the work. they are the messengers. Do Monkeys fly at all? or Pigs? What's wrong with the world? -Monkey's can fly when they jump. As can Pigs. The world is going to die because we litter with our nukes. girl picks up a wine bottle and debates to smash the bottle against the dudes head or serve it, which one will she do? By the way, is there any right or wrong to this question? Or this one? or that one? -there is no right or wrong, just consequence. We kill each other in real life, turn on a TV or how bout going outside and so on. -We kill each other everywhere. In our dreams, nightmares, stories, creations... I like cursing, or do I not, that's the fight between good and evil...and the monkeys -There is not good nor evil in cursing. There is, again, only consequence. Can you die without dieing? -If you die, your soul will create a new life for itself, so no. Do I make sense? -If I try to make sense out of it, yes. Good-bye and rate how crappy this crap is, crap crappety, crappy, craptapulous...ect. -I had fun commenting this.  | Posted on 2007-04-23 00:00:00 | by MowsysWrath | [ Reply to This ] | random, but hilarious, i am random myself, not in my poetry.....i dont think so ..... i might be , but whatev, very funnny , it made me laugh | Isabella | Posted on 2007-02-07 00:00:00 | by IsabellaAurora | [ Reply to This ] | hmmm, i like your randomness...reminds me of myself. i love this lol prittie darn kick ass if ya ask me | haley | Posted on 2006-11-04 00:00:00 | by haley_ima-mess_ | [ Reply to This ] | lol I've been there...I've done what you just did. I normally get hit for it. I applaud you though. It's just random non-sence to some but it's that random nonsence that you stop to think about...I get it...kinda?...lol | | Posted on 2006-06-14 00:00:00 | by SitaSinclaire | [ Reply to This ] | Dude whatever you are on when writing this I WANT SOME this makes no SENSE AND EMO_CHILD IS TRYING TO CRITISIZE IT Shut The Hell Up EMO_CHILD | | Posted on 2006-06-10 00:00:00 | by Laz | [ Reply to This ] | Are you on crack?lol! this was very odd, but it was very nonsence, different... very different... why... its not funny but it is at the same times, ist stupid but smart, wow... | Amber -suicidachild51- | Posted on 2005-07-19 00:00:00 | by Suicidalchild51 | [ Reply to This ] | |
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