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    dots Submission Name: One of My Feelings of Helldots
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    Author: Suicidalchild51
    ASL Info:    15/f/wa
    Elite Ratio:    3.19 - 402/332/83
    Words: 165
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 281
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 965



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       This is about me, loving my brother, he is the most best brother i could ask for, and, he is always bullsiting me about something, and he acts like he hates me, sometimes i wanna kill myself.


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    dots One of My Feelings of Helldots
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    I'm jealous of their looks,
    I'm jealous of the guys,
    But what I'm really jealous of,
    Is the sibling ship they have.

    They are all together like to peas and a pod,
    He and I are like a cat and mouse,
    I love him way to death,
    But he hates being in our house.

    I want him to love me like a sister,
    Love me like his friend,
    At times I feel that I,
    Should just put my life to an end.

    All I do is cry for him,
    Cry that he would love me so,
    I cut to heal the pain inside,
    But his love still doesn't show.

    I want to let him know I care
    Make him realize,
    I love him more than anything,
    He is just stuck behind blue eyes.

    So since his love wont show,
    And all he has is hate,
    I'll kill myself and then he'll see,
    My love was really great.




    Submitted on 2005-07-19 01:35:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      That was pretty good. i might have 2 steal some of ur rhymes. it's good that u luv ur brother so much. u outta just kick his ass and be like "i'm doing it cuz i luv u". ur really emotional 4 such a young chick. but i guess u shouldn't read a book by its cover huh? keep it up. ~troy
    | Posted on 2005-07-22 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]



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