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    dots Submission Name: The shipdots
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    Author: snufthepunk28
    ASL Info:    21/f/ak
    Elite Ratio:    4.5 - 244/178/68
    Words: 228
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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       Can the silence hear me?
    As my soul pushes away for silence my mind is flooded with my own voice.
    Today I achieved the silence.
    Tomorrow I pray I well receive Gods voice in place of my own.
    Felicia


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    dotsThe shipdots
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    I donít know why I simple want nothing to do with anything at the moment.
    It is the course in which I completely intend on perusing.
    Lonely seas await me on this course.
    My compass will guide me through the forlornness.
    The company I keep well be kept with a guitar in my arms, a pen in one hand, and a book in another.
    I well listen and wait.
    I am seeking the end, yet the end will be my beginning.
    The clouds cover this sea and a thick mist surrounds me completely.
    The feel of the waves are no existent.
    The only way I actually still know the boat exist beneath my feet is by remembrance that I once was lead aboard on it.
    That it still has yet to sink or fail me in anyway.
    It is the rock on which I stand and on which I lay broken upon.
    Steadily it cares me.
    Raise your hands and pray for wisdom to come and teach me how to use the compass that is bound around my neck.
    I will come and teach you the things that she has taught me with such power and you shall see God before me.
    I will be His servant behind Him for ever giving my lord praise.
    Amen.




    Submitted on 2005-07-19 02:46:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This write is powerful
    To me you are speaking of how God gives us all the tools we will ever need in Life
    But
    It is up to us to figure out how to use them
    This write REALLY made me think
    Thank You for sharing this
    God Bless
    Ron
    | Posted on 2006-02-04 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      cool, ok, this isn't really something i could get MY teath into but im sure that there is someone out there that could use this. The reason i say i couldn't use this is that well its aboul being lost and not being able to find your path, aha. i believe that noone has a path and it can't be foubd but what you can do is hack and slash your way through the jungle as best you can and try not to get eaten by the annimals. Got set up the entire worlsd as a kill or bee killed plannet and who are we to say that he/she/they/it are/is wrong, thanks neway,
    | Posted on 2005-08-18 00:00:00 | by Siriquelle | [ Reply to This ]
      some time everyone needs to be alone with their work... it the work can hurt and there has to be a gental ballance... this is a hard thing to work out... but it looks like your getting it

    i like the poem

    it has getnle wording and i know exactly were you coming from

    this is good... keep working
    on the flipside
    -DS
    | Posted on 2005-07-19 00:00:00 | by milo stills | [ Reply to This ]
      What a lovely insightful prayer. It gave me the feeling of being outcast and downtrodden in the beginning, but then felt like it was so spiritual at the end there and made me smile. Nice and the transition was smooth...cool beans kiddo. Have a good one and keep smilin'
    | Posted on 2005-07-21 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]


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