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    dots Submission Name: Poetry Dot Condots
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    Author: L.i.
    ASL Info:    20ish/m/aynu realm
    Elite Ratio:    4.25 - 55/42/8
    Words: 231
    Class/Type: Poetry/Angry
    Total Views: 398
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 1194



    Description:
       This poem is similar to the other posted title "False Advertisement", but a whole lot better. I actually put some thought into this one. But once again it is talking about those folks from poetry.com! But a bit of a warning, there is explicit content contained within this piece!


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    dotsPoetry Dot Condots
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    I entered one of your wack ass poetry contests
    Just for you to publish it so you could have a
    table of contents
    Don’t take this out of context, but keep it in
    proportion
    Your poetry scams are more inhumane than a
    fucking fetal abortion
    Advertising lies and telling people this book can
    be found in all stores
    Using poets as pawns, selling their lines and
    bodies like whores
    My stanzas weren’t created to feed your
    pockets with money
    Your kind is the reason why starving artists stay
    hungry
    Making people think they’ve earned their
    position by battling the antagonist
    But in actuality, just entering a poem puts them
    into the semifinalist
    Sending people invitations to Florida with no
    expenses paid
    Portraying that you’ll be honoring them, but
    they’re not the only one in this charade
    And if they go they’ll feel betrayed, but they've
    already paid their dues
    On this trip they didn’t want to get nailed, but
    it’s too late they just got screwed




    Submitted on 2005-07-19 13:30:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      welll ... wow i love it .. yeah .. when that happens, we as artist feel terrible and this writing came out from that .. and it has a very strong meaning
    a good write man
    take care
    and keep writing!
    peace and love
    Victor
    | Posted on 2006-03-21 00:00:00 | by vitoko | [ Reply to This ]
      Nice. This happened to my brother with poetry.com. I agree with you on this. Nicely done. Had a rap feel. Cool.
    Later. Angel
    | Posted on 2005-08-27 00:00:00 | by AngelOutlaw | [ Reply to This ]
      hahah! beitchin man!you should send this [censored] to them through mail...jackassesthey should DIE DIE DIE!**slaps herself**ehem...good poem...great read and ui agree its better that the other one!

    -Suicidalchild51-
    | Posted on 2005-08-26 00:00:00 | by Suicidalchild51 | [ Reply to This ]
      That was hot and it was a little like def poetry jam. I like your work. I liked how you used something real like scams and wrote a poem about it.
    | Posted on 2005-08-26 00:00:00 | by Poeticprincess | [ Reply to This ]
      i felt a shady vibe the first time they sent me something letting me know the reviewed it and wanted to publish.... but i let that ride...
    and that 20 lines or less [censored], is blowin me...
    now back to your piece. you know what im not even going to cirtique this because it hits dead on the head on so many points its slightly ridiculous....
    let me now go ahead an pull my [censored] off....quick fast in hurry...
    one...
    | Posted on 2005-07-21 00:00:00 | by elohimswork | [ Reply to This ]
      I like this. I share the same feelings about poetry.com. I f*ing hate them. It is like one big scam. I can't even count how many times I was invited to Florida ("with no expenses paid"). I submitted something like a year ago and they're still harassing me. Great, now I'm mad again lol. Oh well. Anyway, awesome poem. I love the title. Very well worded and creative. I like it a lot. Great job

    -nikkki
    | Posted on 2005-07-21 00:00:00 | by Liv2LoveThePain | [ Reply to This ]
      Good write I enjoyed reading it , good format it juss all game together well and great subject I’m sure we all feel like that sometimes But I’m No Talent check out some of my stuff sometime aight thanks
    | Posted on 2005-07-20 00:00:00 | by No Talent | [ Reply to This ]
      wait, is the book called something like the "American Poets Anthology" or some [censored] like that??? i hope not. i submitted a poem years ago adn those [censored]s sent me a letter saying i'd be published, even sending a check to pay for the [censored] book to be sent all the [censored] way to Louisiana. i swear to God, dude I'll take those mongoloids to [censored] court so quick i'll have their noses twitching. PM me or something if you know what i'm tlaking about.~nahlij
    | Posted on 2005-07-19 00:00:00 | by Aknahlij_d 1 | [ Reply to This ]
      i like how you took such a close to home problem and fed off of it and vented your anger in the form that they like! the last word 'screw' would work better as 'screwed' as that is what i think you meant to type ;p
    "Your kind is the reason why starving artists stay hungry" i don't know why but i absolutely loved that line. the mix of truth and reality here is done really good. i agree with shrink when they said it reads like a rap song. i can sense disappointment in your words as well as anger. this gave me the same feeling i got when i listened to a song by eminem...''Sing for the Moment''
    my second favorite on this site :D
    | Posted on 2005-07-19 00:00:00 | by serge | [ Reply to This ]
      Those [censored]tards ...for real ...i tested that out a while ago and sent in a rather undignified poem ...and of course found myself in the semi finals ...*giggle* ...Nice vent ....I enjoyed the read
    | Posted on 2005-07-19 00:00:00 | by Krysti | [ Reply to This ]
      This was a great read. Loved the way you stuck to them! I've heard about these scams - Sucks big time! This had the feel of a rap song, is that correct? loved the pace rhyme and rhythm. Anyway good write!

    Steve
    | Posted on 2005-07-19 00:00:00 | by SHRINKSDR | [ Reply to This ]



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