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    dots Submission Name: Chaindots
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    Author: rws
    ASL Info:    57/m/ohio
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 2777/1297/258
    Words: 37
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 716
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 522



    Description:
       This is a word chain in which the last letter of the previous word is the first letter of the next word. It's similar to the word association drills common to certain forms of psychotherapy.


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    dotsChaindots
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    Insomnia
    asinine
    enduring
    ghost
    titular
    recluse
    escaping
    grasp
    permanently
    young
    gifted
    dead
    dried
    decayed
    delicate
    endearing
    generous
    soul
    lost
    trembling
    goodnight
    tender
    reader
    respect
    time
    "est-tu, Brute?"
    electorate
    end
    despair
    resurrect
    tunnel
    lust
    trust
    temper
    return




    Submitted on 2005-07-19 18:16:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I liked this a lot. It is different from the other posts on elite. I like unique stuff. The "chain" was shown well. I liked the end word... like a chain attached to itself, and the reader keeps going round and round... The one thing I found funny was: "est-tu, Brute?" I just read Caesar in my english class, wonder how many of the younger readers will understand. For some reason that stuck out as being humorous. Anyways, good right. :P
    LeAnna
    | Posted on 2005-07-19 00:00:00 | by RedRoseofBlood | [ Reply to This ]
      how did you come up with the first word.. was it planned out or did it just come to you.. i love the idea its something different..<3ash
    | Posted on 2005-07-19 00:00:00 | by scardnscared | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow! is this like how you feel inside? I love the whole idea of it. another question, Is this what first came to your mind? Or did it take awhile to write? Very interesting...
    | Posted on 2005-07-19 00:00:00 | by HECATE_Sservant | [ Reply to This ]


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