Silent Prayer
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A soppy song I write. Let's start a band. Hehehehe!!!!!! Any feedback is appreciated.
Have a BE-YOU-TEE-FUL day!
Have a BE-YOU-TEE-FUL day!
Silent Prayer
You left without a word You never said goodbye I never had the chance to say I'm sorry I wonder where you are I need to see you one last time To tell you how I feel But where you are? I do not know So I say a silent prayer (Chorus) Keep her safe from harm keep her in Your loving arms and let her find the way to all she's searching for Never let her go Never leave her cold And may she find the strength to face her fears And live another day You left me only memories Fading as the days goes by The warmth of your sweet embrace Your smile, I miss it so But where are you? Oh tell me please Lord I'm down on bended knees Chorus (Bridge) Baby I never meant to cause you pain Oh, never meant to hurt you Never meant to break your heart Oh... If you just give me one last chance To tell you what you mean to me My silent prayer for you (repeat) Keep her safe from harm Keep her in Your loving arms Let her find her way Let her find her way Back to me Chorus (Outro) A silent prayer for you |
Submitted on 2005-07-20 01:09:05 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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| Love it. YOu have such a great gift. I think I read one of your other writes a couple days ago. But I think this is was better! Its really really beautiful. The name for this I like Silent Prayer. The whole meaning is for you to say a prayer and the prayer is to watch over this person, and make this person doesn't get hurt. But I really enjoyed it. It was differant and yet the same. You know what I mena. It was a beautiful write. The thing I thought you did the best with is the chorus, ccompletely amazing. I love it I had a rhythem going for it Keep her safe from harm keep her in Your loving arms and let her find the way to all she's searching for Never let her go Never leave her cold And may she find the strength to face her fears And live another day I think you did a really good job on that. I thought these lyrics had a great flow, for the parts that were rhymed you did a good job with that without making it seemed forced. Good Job Keep it up Stephanie | Posted on 2005-07-20 00:00:00 | by XxStephyxX04 | [ Reply to This ] | This is another beautiful piece of work. With your talent for writing I wish you all the luck in getting your songs recorded. The feelings you show is evident by asking the Lord to watch over her and protect her etc. That's coming straight from the heart. A beautiful write, a beautiful love song! I would love this one too! take care, wanda | | Posted on 2005-07-20 00:00:00 | by bigfineq | [ Reply to This ] | |
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