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    dots Submission Name: The rhyme of music and lovedots
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    Author: solemnpen
    ASL Info:    18
    Elite Ratio:    4.02 - 303/339/42
    Words: 153
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       This is just a little tidbit that i think of when i hear a good love song. im sure im not the only one. its for the love of music and "love" that people do what they do. poetry would be much less without the 2


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    dotsThe rhyme of music and lovedots
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    When you hear the chorus
    you have heard the words
    When the verse starts
    That special one, has finally touched your heart
    When you cry and feel alone
    Their was a bad instrumental, a terrible song
    When you say, I'm sorry for treating you like shit
    The band finally came out with a good hit

    Love reminds us of music, sweet sounds of heaven
    Hesitation and determination battle 24/7
    On whether its good or bad
    Or if it's going to make people happy or sad

    The dating starts with mistakes being made
    But the project slowly moves on
    With every passing day
    A nice solo from a guitar
    Will make you close your eyes
    And say true music and love
    Are there for our pleasures
    Even if their is some pain
    And they will never be tainted by a disguise
    They will always live up to their names




    Submitted on 2005-07-20 17:37:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      wow.. i don't know what to say...
    i love this stanza>Love reminds us of music, sweet sounds of heaven
    Hesitation and determination battle 24/7
    On whether its good or bad
    Or if it's going to make people happy or sad

    i love rock, and rap..but when a love song comes on..thats exaclty how i feel
    love kay
    | Posted on 2005-07-22 00:00:00 | by Kay | [ Reply to This ]
      i have to agree with everyone in the sense that this was an interesting way to look at love and music and realize that most of us probably do compare the two but just dont realize it. so great job for being able to fit the two concepts in together that is very clever. keep it up...Joy
    | Posted on 2005-07-21 00:00:00 | by sweet_rayne | [ Reply to This ]
      This was a very interesting and well thought out take on love and music. For every emotion/everything a person goes through, there's a song for that. Just as every time you feel something and you need to find a way to express it...there's a chorus somewhere that says it all. That was quite good and I hope to read some more.
    | Posted on 2005-07-21 00:00:00 | by dreamweaver | [ Reply to This ]
      Now that was pretty interesting, mixing love and music,clever and good. Love and music do go together quite well ask any rock star,lol only kidding there. Your poem carried out your thoughts clearly and will make people stop and think a bit.

    Keep smiling
    Edward
    | Posted on 2005-07-21 00:00:00 | by edthepoet | [ Reply to This ]
      wow i relly like that.. i love it how u classify love n music into the same thing..very nice..

    Love reminds us of music, sweet sounds of heaven
    Hesitation and determination battle 24/7
    On whether its good or bad
    Or if it's going to make people happy or sad


    my fav stanza<3ash
    | Posted on 2005-07-20 00:00:00 | by scardnscared | [ Reply to This ]


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