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    dots Submission Name: Chain Toodots
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    Author: rws
    ASL Info:    57/m/ohio
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 2777/1297/258
    Words: 23
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 726
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 340



    Description:
       Another chain; probably my last, the novelty has left me. Time to move on to another form.


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    dotsChain Toodots
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    Tender
    endearing
    neurotic
    isolation
    ominous
    unknown
    wicked
    elegaic
    introduce
    chord
    remorse
    safety
    terrorist
    shaman
    androgyny
    nakedness
    shabat
    awareness
    selective
    vapor
    once
    charming
    none




    Submitted on 2005-07-20 20:59:57     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Some of the words in this were great, although they might have a greater effect in an actual poem. what is the purpose of this chain..is it suppose to be a vent or..tell us something..im a bit lost but when am i not.
    | Posted on 2005-07-20 00:00:00 | by brokensmile | [ Reply to This ]


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