I can't learn...
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old poem...not so sure if i like it...too much me in it, ya know?
luckily i'm a bit happier now. I think psychology class with the shrill woman is just enough to make anyone miserable...lol.
I just needed something new to post
anyway, tell me what you think
luckily i'm a bit happier now. I think psychology class with the shrill woman is just enough to make anyone miserable...lol.
I just needed something new to post
anyway, tell me what you think
I can't learn...
In a class, drop spinning a stolen blue pen She's lecturing us on memory, but I've forgotten most of what she's said I think all those hours of colouring my world with sharpies has gone to my head I'm learning how to hate writing And loathe reading But I can't learn how to stop breathing I've given up on finding someone to love I've given up on trying to find a friend But I can't seem to give up completely And bring my life to an end the over doses are never enough And all the ropes I bring to my neck Fall limp in my hands before I'm completely gone And I have all of the bruises to prove it Everytime I try to hold my head under the water My mouth gasps for water before my mind can stop it And now I'm giving up on giving up Will I forever be a quitter Succumbing to the misery of whatever is placed in front of me...? |
Submitted on 2005-07-20 21:05:09 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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| whoaaa courtney. i like this alot. u come up with awesome works. i know these things say not to give just compliments, but i really just love it and have nothing i think u should change about it. _Stephanie_ | Posted on 2005-12-08 00:00:00 | by roxygirl | [ Reply to This ] | inspired by bobo's class? haha yea | [[She's lecturing us on memory, but I've forgotten most of what she's said]] haha good piece of irony [[But I can't learn how to stop breathing]] i thought that line was cool [[My mouth gasps for water before my mind can stop it]] did you mean "air" in place of "water"? i liked this sophie | Posted on 2005-07-24 00:00:00 | by sudie | [ Reply to This ] | Giving up on giving up...good line. Kind of like sick and tired of being sick and tired. I liked the whole write and it was easy to get into. The feeling of not being able to give up was quite inspirational and just made it seem a little uplifting...is that weird...? | Have a good one and keep writin' | Posted on 2005-07-24 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ] | i like it... the first stanza is tops... it's very... cute.. it reminds me of a girl that means a lot me... | i think i like it, cause it shows a sence of humor... ya know... parts are said but it's pretty funny too... She's lecturing us on memory, but I've forgotten most of what she's said thats a great line.. it made me laugh... i think with a little more work this could be great just try and clear out your thoughts give reasons for why you feel like that... this would help a lot in the seconds stanza... this is a cool little poem on the flipside | Posted on 2005-07-20 00:00:00 | by milo stills | [ Reply to This ] | I love this. I found the whole thing to be completely amazing. Your words described me perfectly. There is nothing I don't like about it. I have nothing negative to say. Great job |  -nikkki | Posted on 2005-07-20 00:00:00 | by Liv2LoveThePain | [ Reply to This ] | The first part, made me chuckle a little, I just got done doing summer psychology yesterday. And it made me kind of giggle. Lol. The end of it was cool. I was different from the beginning, but still good. And for this being some of your begining work, I can only imagine what awesome stuff you have now. Lol. | | Posted on 2005-07-20 00:00:00 | by Blindly-N-Love | [ Reply to This ] | |
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