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    dots Submission Name: I gambleddots
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    Author: bluesoxz
    ASL Info:    16fohio
    Elite Ratio:    3.17 - 71/101/38
    Words: 259
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsI gambleddots
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    I gambled my heart
    And I won.I won
    Something you cant
    Claim A once and
    A life time thing.
    You came from the
    heavens above ..To
    have you Im so
    Stunned.

    You blew my life away
    When you stepped up
    And said im yours to
    Claim.I grabbed my
    heart not knowing if
    This is true when you
    Said it was I could not
    Even move.

    I gambled my heart And
    I won... A once and a
    life time thing..They said
    Make sure you treat her
    Right I said I promise I
    Wont let her outta my sight.
    Now I just wanna hug you
    so tight One of these days
    If you let me I might.

    You told me you don't
    Wanna be with no one
    Else..Then I said you
    have me all to yourself
    Babe...Only if you knew
    We will be making love
    Each and everyday.My
    Life is no longer in flames.
    You showed me the way.

    I gambled my heart today
    And I won a once and a
    life time thing.An angel
    That protects...
    My lover.
    My friend
    My soul
    My heart
    My blood
    But must of all my wife.
    I gambled my heart today
    And They say I won a
    Prize and the prize was you.




    Submitted on 2005-07-21 00:04:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      ahhhhh...to be in love! This gives one that warm and fuzzy feeling of being extremely giddy when a new relationship starts. It's nice to find out that some people do hit the jackpot when they gamble. I myself usually come out with less than I went in with! :)
    This was very cute and made me remember what it felt like when I first fell in love. Thanks for sharing this!
    Candi
    | Posted on 2005-07-21 00:00:00 | by dreamweaver | [ Reply to This ]


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