A lovely poem with a great format! I like the style you used here and morning twilight is such splendor. I love the dawn and all that it brings. The few birds that can be heard in the distance as the sky begins to lighten from dark blue to a subtle lighter shade until finally a glorious sunrise and the birth of a new day. The grass always has that dampness from the dew upon it and it is such a calming atmosphere. Ahhh...you have given me wonderful visuals with this short yet great poem! Thanks. Take care!
Free form is the easiest way to let the mind release and spill upon a piece of paper. Thanks for keeping things technical, something I rarely try in your sense. I've been wanting to push myself into more constructive writing, building lines instead of puking them onto a page, but I can't seem to find the patience. Keep keepin' it alive, especially on this site where the majority is free form.
COulda been a lil longer but all and all Great Read Line By line it all just came together good use of metaphors And grammer Overall a Good read glad I had the chance to Enjoy it .By the way Iím No Talent Check out some of my work sometime aight.
I'm not totally sure what the message is in this piece. But I enjoyed reading how it rhymed! I think that it takes quite a bit of time and talent to do it with such rhythem, and actually stick to it. Well if there is a meaning to this maybe you can write me and let me know. Thanks.
Nice, very nice piece. However, I do also wish it were just a little bit longer, if not one more line. The last line almost leaves me hanging...but I must confess, this is the first poem I've read so far on this site that was rhyme-based and that actually sounded good all the way through...hence, i give you credit for that. Good job!