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    dots Submission Name: Always Use Condomsdots
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    Author: solemnpen
    ASL Info:    18
    Elite Ratio:    4.02 - 303/339/42
    Words: 13
    Class/Type: Haiku/Comedy
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    Description:
       just having a little fun i know haikus are usually about nature but oh well


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    dotsAlways Use Condomsdots
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    Mama told him no
    The child screamed and screamed alot
    Always use condoms!!!!!!




    Submitted on 2005-07-21 11:38:35     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      lol!LMAO! that was funny!idk why tho!but it was!that would really suck to have a condom break on u! my frin had that happen oncE!lol! but t wasnt funny to me...anyways!l8r!
    -suicidalchild51-
    | Posted on 2005-07-23 00:00:00 | by Suicidalchild51 | [ Reply to This ]
      LMFAO

    my friend Des and I were actually talking about using condoms about a week ago, when we actually talked but hey nevermind. different story.

    keep up the good work

    Alice
    | Posted on 2005-07-23 00:00:00 | by ambiquous_al | [ Reply to This ]
      that was pretty [censored]in funny. where did that [censored] come from. i'm guessing u just pulled that outta nowhere. thanx 4 the laf.
    | Posted on 2005-07-22 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]
      lol...hey i'm still a virgin..and i aint planning to lose it...man... just keep your head up.. never give up..(remember wht tupac said) and always use condoms...and go fo your thaing
    | Posted on 2005-07-22 00:00:00 | by Kay | [ Reply to This ]
      Hey, thats why I alway use condoms...or find one that is like me...cuz I dont want one, HA! And if you think about this, it is about nature...hee-hee...good stuff maynard...good stuff. Have a good one and keep smilin'
    | Posted on 2005-07-21 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]
      lol. Thanks for the laugh It was a nice haiku. This was a good lesson, and well put across (which is sometimes hard with haikus) Good job!
    ~Kat
    | Posted on 2005-07-21 00:00:00 | by MorbidAngel114 | [ Reply to This ]
      Ha Ha! I can see why you might list this as serious but I thought it was really f*cking funny! This made me laugh! How true is this? Having kids isn't all it's cracked up to be (or at least from what I have seen cause I am smart and I don't have any!) This reminds me of the kid who throws a temper tantrum in the middle of the grocery store and then proceeds to scream the entire time! I think to myself, I am soooo glad I didn't go there! HaHa! I am glad to see you changed this to comedy! I can't tell you the last time I had such a good time with a Haiku! Great job and thanks for the laugh!

    Lorna
    | Posted on 2005-07-21 00:00:00 | by lmz | [ Reply to This ]
      Ha.. Always use condoms.. Like it.. Rocks hard.

    But I don't know if it should be classified by serious, because I found it to be a little more humorous than anything! But that was just me. Lol. GJ
    | Posted on 2005-07-21 00:00:00 | by Blindly-N-Love | [ Reply to This ]
      hey...it's a good lesson contained in this short haiku! Also, just remember (speaking of the haiku/nature thing) that rules are made to be broken right?! Every once in a while a person needs to go against the grain. Keep on writing!
    Candi
    | Posted on 2005-07-21 00:00:00 | by dreamweaver | [ Reply to This ]
      Well all i can hope is that you yourself do not have a little one for yourself. I believe it is too early for you. Hell it is too early for me. My sis has a baby and she is youger! Ahh, angers me still, but I'm an uncle now. I have to do my part.

    brax>.
    | Posted on 2005-08-04 00:00:00 | by Brack-Attax | [ Reply to This ]
      Very light, and yes...comical. You put the point across with very few words. I enjoyed the giggle it gave me. Thanks! hehe.

    Keep writing, I think you have a knack for comedy ;).

    *hugs a plenty*
    Avry
    | Posted on 2005-08-11 00:00:00 | by SouthrnQT | [ Reply to This ]


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