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    dots Submission Name: contemplationdots
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    Author: maninthemirror
    ASL Info:    17/m/arkansas
    Elite Ratio:    2.64 - 224/318/109
    Words: 97
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 582
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    Bytes: 510



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       I dont know what i was thinking when I wrote this I just started writing.... It probably doesnt make alot of sense but I still like something about it

    tell me what it is that you think about it


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    dotscontemplationdots
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    it's contemplated for a while
    think about it, think it through
    is it something that you need to do
    now why is that, is it that you hate your world
    and want to get rid of it
    do you know what lyes beyond, of course not
    I am the only one of few
    I'm hated in this world but in the next I'll be loved
    wondering what it will be like is something of the past
    , its too late for me, but you can still be saved please accept my warning.




    Submitted on 2005-07-21 15:45:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      yeah this one was short and pretty deep. a lot of people hate this world and try to find solice in the next because religion promises them paradise in the next world if they follow certain rules or guidelines so we wait to get uplifted after death to a place that we hope exists
    | Posted on 2006-04-25 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]


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