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    dots Submission Name: dying sounds good right nowdots

    Author: maninthemirror
    ASL Info:    17/m/arkansas
    Elite Ratio:    2.64 - 224/318/109
    Words: 61
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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       I hate the person I've become

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    dotsdying sounds good right nowdots

    my blood is hot my soul is cold
    my heart is withered dark and mold
    growing through my mind
    this bitter person once i was not
    I hate me now, and no one cares
    and when I die I'll see the stairs
    but sense I know that I'm not worthy
    falling down, I'm sorry for what I've done

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