I love this. I love your title, I love the feel. The whole thing is mystic and very magical to me. It seems like a prayer in a fantasy world, and I like it. The entire thing was very lightly done and very full of feel. Great write.
This is beautiful, Tiffany. I remember sailing at night during full moon, and seeing the moon's reflection on the rippled waves. I would think of this as visual, your images are very real, but also as an anthem of thanks to the keeper of the night.
Full moon happened just last week and it is horrible how some people become so disoriented. Darkness does contain the Divine, faith keeps it alive. Thanks for sharing this one. peace and love, Nan
Short but sweet right to the point I love it, Great Read Line By line it all just came together good use of metaphors And grammer Overall a Good read glad I had the chance to Enjoy it .By the way Iím No Talent Check out some of my work sometime aight.
You know...I just realized that there aren't enough poems that pay homage to the moon, unless they're dark poems. Not that there aren't any, but this was really beautiful. I enjoyed it immensely! It was an easy and enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing! Candi
Reminds me of a few nights ago when I was swimming at the beach and the moon was shining. I really like this poem, its relaxing. I especially like the 3rd and 4th stanzas. Ok, honestly, I have no bad comments. I really have nothing else to say either. This was a good write, and I liked it! ~Kat