i'm sorry for tricking you i'm sorry for lyin
I'm sorry for being the cause of your crying
i want to make it better but I can so I wont be trying
my guilt has got me lying on the floor
praying to god that for a chance, just one more
I promise that I won't mess up, not agian
It hurts me to see what it is that I've done
I know you said just one more
But that was before
just say once more one more time
if you do then that will serve the purpose of this read rhyme
will you just tell me you forgive me, if you dont I understand
you will see just why I ask this, will you let me see your hand?
Well at least something productive came out of it. That's all I have to say about this. I take cheating very seriously and would normally hate anyone who has or will. You have realised you have done wrong, which is more than can be said for some people. Welcome to the site and I hope you continue to write and express your emotions.
This is a great write, a nice flow to it. It made me feel truly sad, almost as though I was torn between his guilt and her grudge. It was pretty clear overall and it reminded me of some of my past experiences. I deffinantly want to keep reading your stuff...It's all very original.
i like this a lot...I can relate to it...I cheated on my boyfriend recently...I regret it so much and I want to make it up to him but i don't know how...After he found out...I prayed...I don't belive in praying..but I did...I was willing to do anything to have another chance...I now have one...so I guess I will see if it works out... I liked this poem a lot... Very good job