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    dots Submission Name: My Best Frienddots
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    Author: lethargic_me
    ASL Info:    15,chick
    Elite Ratio:    3.15 - 74/87/22
    Words: 60
    Class/Type: Poetry/Sorry
    Total Views: 292
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 384



    Description:
       Is there someone in your life that you couldn't possibly see yourself living without?

    Well, that's how Alice is for me. Yeah, she completely ratted me out in my journal for you all to see, and is now blackmailing me to keep it posted.

    But she's amazing and she's always been there for me and I know the poem is short.

    But we got in a fight today and I said some things that I really didn't mean and this is sort of an apology.

    Alice please pm me or call me. You're making me sad. I love you.


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    dotsMy Best Frienddots
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    My favorite person in the whole world
    she makes me laugh,smile,spin and twirl.

    So much ambiquity, so much pain
    I think about her every day.

    I'd kick her ass, and make her cry
    wait, what am I saying that's a lie.

    Sure she might tell my secrets everyday
    but she'll always be there to share my pain.




    Submitted on 2005-07-21 23:32:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      the whole little piece was a good way of describing a best friend

    best friend
    to the end
    best friends
    can make amend
    for everything they do
    they get pissed at you
    you get pissed at them
    but you go out on a limb
    to be their best friend
    thats what their for
    god bless des and alice
    amen
    | Posted on 2005-07-26 00:00:00 | by solemnpen | [ Reply to This ]
      deep,...i really like it...i have a friend like this, we fight sometimes and [censored] but in the end of the day we love each other to death! you described it ina very good way...really like it...good job
    | Posted on 2005-07-22 00:00:00 | by anita_89 | [ Reply to This ]
      awww.. this is sad..i hate that...specially when they say all ur private [censored].. man...but, if she reads this i think she should love you. if she doesnt...shes not worth it.
    -suicidalchild51-
    | Posted on 2005-07-22 00:00:00 | by Suicidalchild51 | [ Reply to This ]



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