That Kiss -------------------------------------------
That made my knees tremble
And made me almost fall
That made it imposible to stop
And open my eyes
That made me fall for you
That made me say
YES, YES, YES, YES.
That made me love you
The kiss of love
From your lips
Beautiful lips that touched my lips
Beautiful tongue that
Touched my tongue
With my tongue
That kiss, the kiss…
I liked this too! Totally made me smile...made me think back to my first kiss. Made me think of my boyfriend. And I mean some things you just never forget...like THAT KISS...the kiss just...took your breath away...and made ya fall in love. Great job...thanks for bringing back some memories! :) ~hailie~
Hola ana! ok this poem was interesting. Yeah is it about Henrique? or Didi? (dont worry no one from school reads your poems so you can chill...) yeah I kind of have a poem called the same title but whatever it was just really wierd in this part:
That kiss That made me say YES, YES, YES, YES.
sounds like you were having just a little bit more than "a kiss" O.o yeah ok you also had a couple spelling mistakes but I'm too lazy to actually scroll up ok whatever chau
I am truly impressed! I am totally amazed at how you transformed it into a general kiss, into a specific kiss. "That kiss, the kiss, YOUR kiss.." Great way to make a poem personalized. I think the typos are simple errors, but the poem in itself was absolutely great!
this was good... i enjoyed that kiss also. and this piece pretty much hits it on the preverbial nail, hitting the heartfelt emotions that is involved with that special moment that is twisted with that perfect kiss.. enjoyed reading this good job
this is a great poem and i truly hope you keep up the awesome work. love is a beautiful thing but try to be careful. not everyone believes in it. i love this piece and i do hope to see more by you in the future. i hope you write more on this subject. it helps people out there who have been hurt by love. it lets them know that its still out there and thats people out there can still have feelings and trust. keep up the awesome work. and stay with the awesome kisses! love tina
(ps my name here is ladiesplanet1 so if you have any ?'s write me there! awesome write, like i said. keep it up!)