Description: with just a few days talking to lethargic me i have found someone that i really would like to get to know nothing more than to scratch the surface i wouldnt even dare to call it love
A tribute/proposal to a friend -------------------------------------------
Did I ever think I would meet somebody
that would share the same hobby as me??
sure thats what makes the world go around
but can that person share the same hobby
and pick you up when, if ever, you go down
Does that person have the ability?
to write a few words
and make me feel like a god in greek mythology
of course she doesnt know it,
that defeats the purpose
of taking the time and effort to scratch the surface
A proposal of something diffrent,
nobody has ever seen
a guy ask a girl to become a friend
without going hysterical or making a scene
with the same emotions and ways to express
it will become a tearful goodbye at best
with our pens wrapped together
I don't believe that cade and des
will live better
well this is a good poem, and i agree with the others that you shouldn't use this to ask a girl to be friends, there are a few spelling errors but they are easy to fix, you have a great flow to this poem, it is strong from the begining to end, and i'd have to say that my favorite stanza would be
"A proposal of something diffrent, nobody has ever seen a guy ask a girl to become a friend without going hysterical or making a scene"
and i like this one because you talk about not making a scence and it reminded me of my friends and i because we are loud and annoying out and about.
Well it is a good poem and it's deep. I'd have to agree with crypto and candi don't use this to let the girl know you want to be friends. As a female i would have to say i'd get alitle confused. other than that it's a good poem a little rough around the edges but it's fresh. Georgina
I have to agree with crypto that you don't really want to use this poem to let her know that you want to "scratch the surface" and be friends. All in all this was a nice poem. Keep it up, i've been watching ya! :) Candi