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    dots Submission Name: it's easy to be anyonedots
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    Author: pioneerheart
    Elite Ratio:    4.51 - 204/205/140
    Words: 406
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Description:
       this is dedicated to the broken heart and the broken promise. and remember, you die because you're careless or careful...


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    dotsit's easy to be anyonedots
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    yeah, well, people say what they wanna say
    you don't have to answer to me, anymore
    I could act helpless, like before; getting mad
    'cause I don't like this anymore -than you do
    now, that you believe you can survive anything
    you find yourself again in another time and place

    chorus;
    yes, yes I understand , I guess I have to somehow; someway
    just because you can't look into my eyes today
    doesn't mean I have to cry, the same way, anymore
    oblivous demise; the distance in your ever
    particular compromise; telling all those lies
    yes, yes I understand , you call yourself a friend
    it's easy to be anyone
    yes, yes I understand that you don't


    when he said, "don't take your hard life hard"
    I betcha didn't know, oh baby how I tried
    I betcha couldn't give a damn once more
    and if you're growing old, you don't deserve to know-
    the way I miss you when we were alive
    unless you're on you're own
    it's unsettling to make you try to taste this yesterday- that's slowly never gonna be again; the same


    chorus;
    yes, yes I understand , I guess I have to somehow; someway
    just because you can't look into my eyes today
    doesn't mean I have to cry, the same way, anymore
    oblivous demise; the distance in your ever
    particular compromise; telling all those lies
    yes, yes I understand , you call yourself a friend
    it's easy to be anyone
    yes, yes I understand that you don't

    just tell me, nothing makes sense
    you're one and only's in a trance
    such tragic news has hit the stands
    why promise me the moon and stars when all by far is run by scars ; that Dad has left you.
    you don't have to, you don't have to
    love me anymore
    something tells me this has happened once before...

    chorus;
    yes, yes I understand , I guess I have to somehow; someway
    just because you can't look into my eyes today
    doesn't mean I have to cry, the same way, anymore
    oblivous demise; the distance in your ever
    particular compromise; telling all those lies
    yes, yes I understand , you call yourself a friend
    it's easy to be anyone
    yes, yes I understand that you don't


    xo

    something tells me this has happened once before...

    xo




    Submitted on 2005-07-23 04:01:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      a good little song I play guitar as well, I play a lot of melodic--kinda-punk-rockish style songs but I could picture and hear this being played in a rock n roll type but more folk-e --does that make sennse -eh any-ha -I really dig this verse

    when he said, "don't take your hard life hard"
    I betcha didn't know, oh baby how I tried
    I betcha couldn't give a damn once more
    and if you're growing old, you don't deserve to know-
    the way I miss you when we were alive
    unless you're on you're own

    this says to me when ya left I tried hard to make it hard cause I didn't care about making it easy-not bad I'll cya
    lamemansterms no offense with the folky thing
    | Posted on 2005-07-24 00:00:00 | by LameMansTerms | [ Reply to This ]


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