Description: This might not make sense to ANYBODY else, but my lil bro knows... i wasn't fighting to make stuff rhyme... like down and clown... everything i wanted in here was just right... and i just needed people to know, that i love my lil bro.
To My Brother -------------------------------------------
I know I haven't been the best sister
But I'm trying to fix my life of flaws.
I never meant to hurt you like that.
I lashed out at you with no cause.
I want you to know I love you
And I'll make up for what we missed.
I'm sorry about all the battles and wounds.
Hitting when we should've hugged and kissed.
I enjoy watching you play baseball
And I love watching you grow up.
You are a BIG joy in my life.
What was I thinking with a half full cup?
I'm sorry I wasted 10 yrs of love.
I'm sorry to keep pushing you down.
You are something no one can replace.
You are my version of a "less" scary clown.
You make me laugh without meaning to.
I am proud to call you my lil bro.
I love you with ALL my heart,
And just thought I'd tell you so.
Very sweet Your little brother is almost as gifted as you are too have him in your life I hope you show this to him as I know it will bring new joy God Bless Take Care Ron
Please if you get a chance please take a look at some of my poetry and let me know what you think Thank You Ron
Very sweet Your little brother is almost as gifted as you are too have him in your life I hope you show this to him as I know it will bring new joy God Bless Take Care Ron
Please if you get a chance please take a look at some of my poetry and let me know what you think Thank You Ron
well being that im a big brother and a little brother i can certanly relate. i have a bigger brother and i know the meaning of sibling rivalry. between wedgies and swirlies i always knew that he loved me because he always stood up for me. its like he was the only one that could ever harm me, nobody else not even my parents, could harm me. but now i got a little more muscle than he does so its more of a threaten thing now, lol. but im glad that you wrote this for him, i enjoyed reading it
this was a lovely poem and not at all forced , i have a little brother in age but in height hes my big brother lol we always fought growing up but its different now hes 27 and i'm 30 and we have our own children and sure enough they do exactly the same. take care Lainie x p.s If u havnt already show yr brother , he'll love it.
Merry Meet Dancer, This is a nice poem. I hope you show your Brother. How much younger is he than you? My Brother is 5 yrs younger and my Sister 10 yrs younger. My favorite line was:
You are my version of a less scary clown.
I thoght that was cute. I hope things go better for you and your Bro. Blessed Be Andrea
This is very nice and touching. I'm glad that you can let your brother know how you feel and that you're big enought to apologize for all the wrongs you've made.
Well for what it's worth it's a very nice poem... hope you gave it to him. There wasn't one thing in particular that i liked but overall it's a poem from your heart to his. PeaCe Mandy
This was a very sweet poem and I hope that your bro appreciates it. I'm an only lonely, so I cannot relate on a personal level. However, I do have 2 kids of my own that are only 15 months apart and I see a little bit of this rivalry going on. We'll see how full my hands are in a few years hey?! Either way, this was very nice and I smiled when I got to the "less scary clown" part. Never was a big fan of them myself. Thank you for sharing! Candi
Submission Name: To My Brother
