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    dots Submission Name: I dont rememberdots
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    Author: NgenuousProdigy
    ASL Info:    21/m/Wi
    Elite Ratio:    5.06 - 16/22/6
    Words: 12
    Class/Type: Rant/Misc
    Total Views: 200
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    Bytes: 86



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    In a world with faster transportation,
    One would eventually forget the scenery.




    Submitted on 2005-07-24 08:01:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      in those two simple lines i get a lot from it. people are too busy to take the time to look around anymore. to lazy to care for anything. so i like short pieces that get the point across instead of pieces that are long and repeat over and over just in different words.

    Jessi~
    | Posted on 2005-07-28 00:00:00 | by slntfirflm | [ Reply to This ]
      True.. My friend.. Very true.
    But!
    W h a t a r e y o u t r y i n g t o s a y??

    .. This is a good start to something.. But hardly a piece itself!
    Let see what we can do with this piece..

    I don't remember.
    -
    In a world
    with faster transportation,
    One would
    eventually forget the scenery.
    Trees and mountains
    will be blurs
    in a distant
    state
    of existant.
    Work would be
    500 miles away
    just a trip
    that takes up
    1/48th your day.
    So much gone by
    So much never seen
    So much for goodbye
    I'll be back in five seconds.

    There ya go!
    Something to that affect..
    And feel free to use whatever i put down there.. It's not like you don't use my stuff anyways! :P
    Ratio M. Ducet III

    Post script.. Ive seen some [censored]s in my day.. and you are all of them! Tell Ellie I said hello and give my love to Sara.. Remember, on those cold lonely nights Im no longer around to warm up, that i hate you.. and i hope you die! :)
    | Posted on 2005-07-24 00:00:00 | by Ratiomeducet | [ Reply to This ]



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