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True or False

Author: lainie75
ASL Info:    30/f/uk
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Again this is insprired by Doris Jean , she came up a funny subject and this is the result thanks.

True or False

Goofy , Goofy , Where are your teeth?
They in a glass of water to clean the gunk from underneath.

Goofy , Goofy , Aren't your teeth real?
No i sold them on ebay ,
i got a good deal.

Goofy , Goofy , Oh why did u do that?
I didn't need them anymore , i'm to old to chase the cat.

Goofy , Goofy , Are you happy now?
No , as when i go to chew my bone they really don't know how?

Submitted on 2005-07-25 04:19:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Elaine, please forward the name of your medication - I'd love to have what you've got - ah damn it's not for sale - then again talent never is! Cool fruity!
| Posted on 2005-07-26 00:00:00 | by Aphrodite Dream | [ Reply to This ]
  Lainie, I am laughing so hard my sides hurt. You are really funny. So this is what you and DJ thought of? I need to watch you two. lol. Oh, whatever will you do next? I am scared to know. lol. This was great. I love it.
| Posted on 2005-07-25 00:00:00 | by Magnolia Steele | [ Reply to This ] are a character! You jumped right on the false teeth and came up with a good one! Imagine a dog with false teeth!hahaha
| Posted on 2005-07-25 00:00:00 | by Doris Jean | [ Reply to This ]
  sweet, i once got a goofy hat from the states as a gift from my grandmother, he has always been my best original WD character!
thanks for the laugh!
| Posted on 2005-07-25 00:00:00 | by orpheus | [ Reply to This ]
  Haha! Boy you are in a comical mood! Always nice to read a funny post and thanks again for my second smile this am! This is one subject I hope and pray I never know anything about! I would hate false teeth! I think its funny when people don't use adhesive and those falsies just slide all around...ooh...icky! Nice job Lainie!

| Posted on 2005-07-25 00:00:00 | by lmz | [ Reply to This ]

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