Description: honest to god this was written before i read 'death waits'...... i know the conclusion sounds childish but i couldnt think of how to phrase it more accurately.
this was good death poems are great i think everyone fears death which i dont understand because when you wake up each day you never no what will happen you could get struck by lighting shot or someone you no could die so living is just as open as death is closed just my opinion great piece sandman
whether it's mean or not is a good question but it doesn't apply.this is the way it has to be so that only the fittest survive.not every body is going to make it.if you have a problem with that, it won't be easy.check out my latest, "satanique".i'll get back to this later. SoNNy
Hi I simply love this poem. I really can relate to it. It is the way I feel about this world. The wording is good and it has flow. I think it has a perfect ending. With each stanza you ask a question and I like systematic in the poem.
we're slowly approached by death with every passing second so should we make an effort when we'll soon see our end?
This is my favourite stanza. You have done a great job. With love shabnam
Submission Name: death...
