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    dots Submission Name: Gulliverdots
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    Author: rws
    ASL Info:    57/m/ohio
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 2777/1297/258
    Words: 49
    Class/Type: Poetry/Comedy
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    Description:
       This is merely my weird surmising of a conversation between Gulliver and the Lilliputian queen after the unfortunate urinating incident in the book, "Gulliver's Travels." Bon apetit.


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    dotsGulliverdots
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    As he was staked
    to the ground
    like a human tent,
    a motherly voice
    admonished him:
    "We don't make rules
    to restrict you,"
    the Lilliputian said
    to Gulliver
    "We make rules
    to keep you safe.
    And by the way,
    please don't pee
    on my castle."




    Submitted on 2005-07-25 21:29:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      too bad that wasn't on cliff notes when i had to read that back in high school...lol nice summarization...altho i vaguely remember this story...i know we watched the movie, one of the most bizzare movies i have seen...

    dylanpoe's girl
    | Posted on 2005-07-25 00:00:00 | by dylanpoe | [ Reply to This ]


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