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    dots Submission Name: DarkSyde Representationdots
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    Author: solemnpen
    ASL Info:    18
    Elite Ratio:    4.02 - 303/339/42
    Words: 418
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
    Total Views: 703
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 2375



    Description:
       Darksyde representation
    A mere Application
    Fuck Punctuation
    Does THAT fit a description!???!!??


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    dotsDarkSyde Representationdots
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    Back in the day it was: a hundred spokes
    Nowadays its a: thousand jokes
    who think they can rhyme

    Back then it was a:thousand crimes
    But nowadays it hasnt been:one time
    That a rapper has lived through what they write

    Back then it was:20 clicks ruling the night
    Nowadays its only: darksyde ruling this site
    nobody else can compare,

    to the nightmares we bring; the truth we sing
    and the reality that the streets are hard
    posterboys surround us screaming,
    hollywood is so hard
    But can you name somebody,
    who is more battlescarred??

    Back then: everybody had drama
    Nowadays: its way to much karma
    Nothing but pussies,
    who know nothing of the streets

    Back then: disrespect got you killed
    Nowadays: you got a record deal
    From a magazine publisher
    who thinks he knows music
    but doesnt have a clue for the game
    All he can think about is his famous name

    Now on to elite, fucking idiots try to bring heat
    but they missing a beat
    cause they really think somebody gives a fuck
    You better run back to mama,
    tell her to save you
    tell her the boogie mans chasing you,
    he wants to kill you
    you aint got much time left,
    you almost outta luck

    burdens and sin, stream down my face
    every minute of the day im in a lyrical rage
    just looking for shit to fill up a page
    quick on the trigger, like a rusty 12 gauge
    you better start giving a fuck

    there will come a time, when im giving a sign
    to murder my next victim,
    cause i slow down time
    you mistake me for a faker,
    who only wants to shine
    but my intentions are much more cruel,
    fuck being cool
    who knows who will be next

    darksyde makes the list, the asassain takes aim
    my pen draws so much blood,
    its such a damn shame
    but reality states, my fucking fate, sooner or later ill see the cemetary gates
    and carved in granite slate:

    RIP SOLEMNPEN
    He who kept true, Despite all hate

    So keep the change, bitch and have a glorious day




    Submitted on 2005-07-26 01:17:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    4: Pretty cool
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    ||| Comments |||
      DARKSYDE MUTHA [censored]AAAAAA!

    we run this site this a race horse
    we put you weak niggas on display in day time on the front porch
    we ain't some sort a' trent that's supposed to pass
    you like 20 clicks behind us, so haters can kiss our ass
    our collective, we brandish mic's like katanas
    smells like teen spirit, you can faintly recall our nirvana
    not about dollas, not about cars, its about proof
    living evidence that DS is livin truth
    like POOF~P
    | Posted on 2005-07-26 00:00:00 | by Aknahlij_d 1 | [ Reply to This ]
      It's so much truth in this piece! The [censored] rap game is so screwed up that these soft ass nigaas on the streets be thinking they thugs. But ain't none of them ready to die like B.I.G. and they damn sure don't have the ambitions of a rider like Pac. WHen rappers like Mike Jones can be considered on top of the game something is defintiely wrong. And when people begin to think that 50 Cent is a real nigga something is definitely wrong again. Rappers talk about [censored] they don't do or never have done. In my hood that'll get a nigga wet! I'm glad you dropped this... The truth!

    X
    | Posted on 2005-07-26 00:00:00 | by xtremegentleman | [ Reply to This ]
      ahhhh man u outta let pj read this. he'd go crazy! i didn't know u were down with darkside. good [censored] cade. keep putting fear into the heart of these pussies plaguing the world.
    | Posted on 2005-07-26 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]
      Once again you did not disappoint. This is a great shout out to all the wannabe's-and let me tell you there are a ton of them out there. Most of which couldn't back up their mouths even when their life depended on it. You are very true to yourself and I really respect that. Your writing really makes people see things that maybe they don't really want to see. You have a way of calling people out on the carpet and it's great! I'm totally hick town, so I couldn't even begin to dream about understanding everything that you're saying...but I know people with big mouths that are all talk. The last line of your poem was the best when tied in with everything else that you had to say. Great job and keep it up!
    Candi
    | Posted on 2005-07-26 00:00:00 | by dreamweaver | [ Reply to This ]
      ssssswwwishhh, for the three pointer!, interresting style and flow, the imagery was dark and from the roots of hip hop as i know it, even though i don't know much about the state of hip hop back then i write rhymes for the times i live in now, i have hung out with gangsters but never been one, never killed, been held up robbed and dupped so i guess i am more of a customer than a hustler and i know it, i know what you mean, like the latest 2pac cd real to the Game, produced by Eminem, say what you will about him but he does'nt even rap on this record cause it's about things that he was never involved in! anyways, this was interesting though i lost the flow because this is a visual site and not audio/vis...keep cool
    | Posted on 2005-07-26 00:00:00 | by orpheus | [ Reply to This ]
      So is this what Darksyde is all about? I see you guys talking about it back n forth, but I never asked what it was. This was good. I liked it.
    | Posted on 2005-07-26 00:00:00 | by AngelOutlaw | [ Reply to This ]
      You have once again attracted my mind to your words and I am not disappointed...
    "Back then it was:20 clicks ruling the night
    Nowadays its only: darksyde ruling this site
    nobody else can compare"
    this one I really liked but the whole piece is spectacular
    I think I enjoyed it mostly because you refer to "back then" and I was back then and remember when rappers in general lived through what they wrote...
    Excellent work
    Lisa
    | Posted on 2005-07-26 00:00:00 | by ravenwolf68 | [ Reply to This ]
      darksyde...hits da switches...
    nitrous boost-out of sight,taking ova da night
    daytime too...congregating through and through
    everyone will know now even if they already knew... jusy another way to sort out the facts within lyrical clues.

    masta recipe of a hip hop stew!


    WORD HOMIE>>>>>>

    Brax-
    | Posted on 2005-08-04 00:00:00 | by Brack-Attax | [ Reply to This ]


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