Description: i tend to vent regularly in little poems that i kinna hide places (for lack of a good place to hide a personal journal). seems so far that ppl like my "venting" writing here more than they do the stuff i put more effort into. so, ive decided to post more of my lil hidden poems. the rest will be at my personal page if any1 wants to see them(not on the recent submissions page). umm... say watever u want.
I feel goodbye
knocking at our door
with things we should've--
or never should've--
said at hand.
And it's sad because
I couldn't judge the book
by it's pages
And it's sad because
Well enough
wasn't left alone....
I searched your for things
I knew were not there
loved you for
things you could
never be.
I feel goodbye
knocking at our door
with things that will
never be the same
at hand.
Its me again the master of misunderstandings. Well another poem I'm going to mess up the message (( Like I said before I do misunderstand poems a lot.... SORRY IF I DO ))
Well I liked the fact that your personified goodbye with having it knock at the door. As it came it started to take the love away? It brought up the things that were said, and forgot the things that should of said. And brought up the bad things that had happened and the mistakes of the past.
WEll vent poems are always nice to help vent and what nots. But I'm sorry about the troubles that one goes to. Well I hope you're better, if not well keep venting and everything should be better.
-Eric "ACommonCold" Chang Yes I am the masked renegade.
Submission Name: Goodbye
