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A loada bull


Author: lainie75
ASL Info:    30/f/uk
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Words: 91
Class/Type: Poetry /Comedy
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Inspired by hyprogio's "holy cow"


A loada bull



Old Mcdonald's farm was silent.
After the bull had turned so violent.
He started off just ranting on.
That being a bull was such a con.

But old Mcdonald had come to find.
That no cow would he get behind.
So he thought the bull was really shy.
so he tryed to force him and this was why.

He'd much prefer to be a cow.
So the other bulls would all go wow.
So he kicked mcdonald in the hay.
And said Listen sweetheart this bull is gay.




Submitted on 2005-07-26 19:30:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Okay Lainie, I have read it all! A gay bull? You are just plain crazy woman! I don't know how you do it...did Doris put you up this one too? lol. This was so funny and the rhyme scheme was perfect. You are going to make me hurt myself laughing. I can't leave you alone for 3 days and look what stuff you come up with? lol. Keep the laughs coming.
Maggie
| Posted on 2005-07-31 00:00:00 | by Magnolia Steele | [ Reply to This ]
  haha! omg that is hilarious! it reminds me of some show i watched where they had a cow that wouldnt touch the bulls, it was weird ass show, i'm not sure why i even watched it i was probably that bored, anyways this really really made me laugh.
-steph
| Posted on 2005-07-31 00:00:00 | by playcrackthesky | [ Reply to This ]
  Lainie, Lainie, Lainie, This was greaaat! Just what I needed to end the week off! Thanksagain! lol again and again. It's easy to read and doesn't need brain power to enjoy - just the way I like it!
| Posted on 2005-07-29 00:00:00 | by Aphrodite Dream | [ Reply to This ]
  A queer bull! Dang woman! What are you going to think of next?? You are getting pretty good with your comedy stuff...and you know how much I like the comedy stuff.
I haven't forgotten what we talked about the other day...I still haven't come up with anything interesting, but I will let you know when I do.
DJ
| Posted on 2005-07-28 00:00:00 | by Doris Jean | [ Reply to This ]
  HA! HA! Now, I think old McDonald needs to get his money back, HA! Holy cow ma dear...ya dun good...

Have a good one and keep smilin'
| Posted on 2005-07-27 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]
  To funny, I will never think of that story the same way again.
Quite a twist on a old favorite indeed.
Definitely a nice comedy work, with great wording, well written.
Alan
| Posted on 2005-07-27 00:00:00 | by MidnghtScorpion | [ Reply to This ]
  Hahaha! Elaine! Hahaha! This is good stuff! Imagine a homosexual bull! Hmmm...I wonder what got your mind onto the train of thought?! Well whatever it was, it gave me a smile this morning! How delightful to read this adorable funny poem! Thanks for sharing!
Lorna
| Posted on 2005-07-27 00:00:00 | by lmz | [ Reply to This ]
  lol liked this one but then i dont nice way of relating mcdonald and cows, but the whole supporting gay thing is just not me... really dont wanna go into details because i dont want to give wrong impression or say something that your not trying to say but work on flow just a little other than that good job
| Posted on 2005-07-26 00:00:00 | by solemnpen | [ Reply to This ]
  LMAO, do you really think that there could be gay bulls? wouldn't that be one of the greatest scientific findings?? LOL but i like ur comedic pieces, makes my day

dylanpoe's girl
| Posted on 2005-07-26 00:00:00 | by dylanpoe | [ Reply to This ]
  LMAO, do you really think that there could be gay bulls? wouldn't that be one of the greatest scientific findings?? LOL but i like ur comedic pieces, makes my day

dylanpoe's girl
| Posted on 2005-07-26 00:00:00 | by dylanpoe | [ Reply to This ]
  Very, very cute! you're really getting into the comedy/satire groove. This is so well done the meter and rhyme worked really well! You're going to start a trend that may balance some of the more serious and darker posts on the site.

Steve
| Posted on 2005-07-26 00:00:00 | by SHRINKSDR | [ Reply to This ]
  ROFLMAO It was bound to happen one day, hell if it could happen to Cartman's dog on South Park - it could most definitely happen to Ole McDonald - this is turning out to be a rather comical day - great poem
Lisa
| Posted on 2005-08-03 00:00:00 | by ravenwolf68 | [ Reply to This ]


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