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    dots Submission Name: SHEERdots

    Author: layDsayD
    ASL Info:    29/f/florida
    Elite Ratio:    3.16 - 264/243/147
    Words: 74
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    Revelation, almost tragic. His strength flawed. I wait for the anger , it never comes though , I am filled with an unfamiliar cold . What is left when all the pain is washed away , when the haunting is exercised. Is there solid ground ,where is my tormentor now when I am left silent .What pain will awake me. Who will bind me , where did the rest of me go

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