This took me to the rain forest, to skin of color and souls in repose. The lovemaking we didn't see of course, I love to imagine, just the feel of being in this scene. like everyone else does. I have to say the hinted is so much more lovely and beautiful, the abstraction is just right.
Great job Cheryl, you are the queen of haiku, no doubt, your consistency is amazing. much love, Nan
This is a very nice haiku. But if I'm not mistaken the last line is supposed to have 5 sylibles and I think yours has 6. But maybe I'm pronouncing it wrong? Oh well just thought I'd mention it. -Caitlin
Ooo I like this a lot. It's amazing how much you can say with just a few words. And I think you said it perfectly. lol I'm practically speechless. I usually don't really like haikus, but I love this. Every word is so pretty. Great job