It was only violation by RedRoseofBlood

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Submission Name: It was only violation dots

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Author:	RedRoseofBlood
ASL Info:	17/f/outsideyourwindow
Elite Ratio:	3.33 - 590/581/134
Words:	96

Class/Type:	Poetry/Serious
Total Views:	284
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	586

Description:
O.o It happens.

It was only violation dots

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Her rouge colored cheeks rub against yours
As you hold her head
Wrapped in your warm arms
She will be okay
Even though her world is crumbling
And she is lost in herself
You know what is best for her
You know how to make her feel secure
Gently lay her down on your bed
Undress her
And take complete advantage of her trust
The situation is now worsend
And she is left in tears
What has she done
It isn't rape if she complied
And thats all you care about
Just violation

Submitted on 2005-07-27 15:35:55 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I liked, and the meaning in it, and the feeling of hate towards that person..in a way it reminded me of Cold's Serial Killer, which is about a boy who gets away from a serial killer and later in th future meets him and its about how h felt when he saw him again...but yeah anyway, i di like this poem alot, but i still think it lacked a lil emotion. but yeah thats just me, and please dont get offended...well best wishes and bye
| Posted on 2005-07-27 00:00:00 | by medicated | [ Reply to This ]
  this was strange to me i liked it but felt it was a lil straight forward not that we should beat around teh bush when it comes to violance against woman but may be a lil more cleaver wording or analogies good work though i like the idea of it and i dont see this subject touched on enough
| Posted on 2005-07-27 00:00:00 | by layDsayD | [ Reply to This ]
  Good write!

Yeah, you're right. It happens. All the time. People that take advantage of other people and violate them and degrade them need bullets in their heads.

Yes.

Stefanie
| Posted on 2005-07-27 00:00:00 | by DeadValentine | [ Reply to This ]
  This piece seemed just like a predator - you think it's going to be someone or something that will comfort and protect her but it's a wolf in sheep's clothing as he just takes advantage.
Good write!
Love,Peace,Joy! epiphany ; - }
| Posted on 2005-07-27 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
  I like it! What it reminds me of is like a father figure to a girl. Not necessarily alot older, but he may be a few years older. And she looks up to him, probably didn't have a father. And because she loved him so much, she let him do what he wanted. And he obviously didn't see her that way, and was only looking for a good feeling. And he acts as if it was nothing.
Great write! xD
| Posted on 2005-08-01 00:00:00 | by DreamofOrganon | [ Reply to This ]

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