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    dots Submission Name: spiders, flies, moths and moredots
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    Author: splifford
    Elite Ratio:    3.06 - 39/42/16
    Words: 111
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 262
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Description:
       i didn't think it was ever going to happen, this is the 1st poem i have ever wrote with out using " I ".


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    dotsspiders, flies, moths and moredots
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    all the cupboard doors are open
    and the garbage is too full
    there's piss on the bathroom floor
    and the shower's growing mold
    this house is horrible
    but it's the ppl who are a mess

    the shingles have out lived thirty years
    and the eaves troughs are growing trees
    the windows are very old
    and the porch has a hole
    this house is horrible
    but it's the ppl who are run down

    everything in the drawer is from the $ store
    and the food has no name
    the bills are piling up
    and there's a creditor on the phone
    this house is horrible
    because the ppl here are poor




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