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    dots Submission Name: I hurt myselfdots

    Author: maninthemirror
    ASL Info:    17/m/arkansas
    Elite Ratio:    2.64 - 224/318/109
    Words: 120
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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       I know it probably ain't all that fucking great but what the hell

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    dotsI hurt myselfdots

    I hate myself...whats wrong with me
    I can't help these emotions, what will I do
    I feel like no matter where I go
    People sitting there laughing at me
    People criticizing my moves and everything I do
    I wonder wat it would be like if they were in my shoes
    they'd still laugh at me who am I kidding
    there's no way anything will ever change
    it doesn't go away in time
    time makes the everything worse
    I dont know why
    I guess it doesn't really matter
    no...Who really gives a fuck anyway
    none of them do, they're laughing in my face
    for that one mistake
    The time you fucked up
    nobody will forget it

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      well that is pretty much how it goes i can relate me and misty_of_moon go to school togeather and ity is constant nagging from every prep and person at school. so i can honestly relate great poem though keep it up.

    Love, Serenity Blade
    | Posted on 2005-07-29 00:00:00 | by Demon__666 | [ Reply to This ]
      hey, just hang in there ok. i like ur point of veiw, thinking if they were in your shoes would they still be laughing...idk what ur situation is but they probably wouldnt be. people like that are [censored]wads. [censored]s. i hope it gets better for you.
    | Posted on 2005-07-28 00:00:00 | by Suicidalchild51 | [ Reply to This ]
      a few typoes...but I can really relate to the feeling this poem gives out. I've been through those emotions too. It flowed very nicely, keep on writing
    | Posted on 2005-07-28 00:00:00 | by pinkband_aid | [ Reply to This ]
      I get the feeling that it embodies the tradgedy of self esteem and the power of retrospect-a hopelessness. It liked it; it shows your own personal struggle, and it shows you care. Inner struggles involving the further complication of the actions of others suck. Keep fighting, though.
    | Posted on 2005-07-28 00:00:00 | by Aaron Felix | [ Reply to This ]

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