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    dots Submission Name: Meaning of a Rosedots
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    Author: t0_eazy
    ASL Info:    26/M/Indiana
    Elite Ratio:    2.79 - 118/123/41
    Words: 144
    Class/Type: Poetry/Romance
    Total Views: 1478
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 887



    Description:
       I believe this is one of my best pieces of work. I spent about an hour or two revising this...tell me what you think.


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    dotsMeaning of a Rosedots
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    A rose is given by a person,
    Who knows theyíre in the wrong.
    A rose is given by a man,
    To further things along.
    It seems the true meaning of itís purpose,
    Has faded over time.
    And I am here to tell you,
    Thatís why I pen this rhyme.
    The Rose is a symbol of true love,
    A simple, unspoken bond.
    Yet many of us tend to see,
    A relationship magic wand.
    So if youíve read this once or twice,
    And still canít understand.
    You must have never had your heart,
    In the palm of someoneís hand.
    But do not fret, all is not lost.
    Because you will someday meet,
    The only person that you feel,
    Could make your life complete.
    And when you wish to be near them,
    In every waking hour.
    You will finally comprehend,
    The true meaning of this flower.




    Submitted on 2005-07-28 13:44:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      you sure you a guy?
    your writings really contain alot of insight(those that i read)
    i would love a guy like you as a friend...
    i realise alot of people forget what the meaning of roses are but yet they still cut them down and kill them for no reason at all.
    *sighs*
    | Posted on 2007-04-05 00:00:00 | by rubymoon | [ Reply to This ]
      stunning...not many guys around these days that can read so much into girls! i love the wording in it.its lookin at the full amount of beauty a rose possesses...just pure brilliance!
    | Posted on 2006-02-04 00:00:00 | by heidi | [ Reply to This ]
      Beautiful! This is a wonderful love letter written as a poem rhyming and reasoning. I have nothing I can critique ...if something isn't broke don't break it. `always write poetry, Cheryl
    | Posted on 2005-11-21 00:00:00 | by ladyngold | [ Reply to This ]
      it's sweet, realistic, but sweet. every rose has its thorn, and in this the poem was beautiful...but at the same time felt a little sad, almost like the feeling of longing. only one guy ever gave me a rose, and it was the most perfect moment of my life. someone had cared about me so much to give a powerful symbol like that. great work, i'm going to add this to my favorites so i can read it over and over.
    | Posted on 2005-09-22 00:00:00 | by bluecrane | [ Reply to This ]
      This poem makes me smile on the outside, as wel as on the inside. Its so simple, but so true. Your words carry such a real life meaning and focus, and it sadens me to realise that what you put is true. A rose is an object to be used for love, not to be thrown towards any person, as a way to cover pain or lies...
    I would like to add this to my fav's.

    Mstr Rz
    | Posted on 2005-09-08 00:00:00 | by master raz | [ Reply to This ]
      Great job, I like it a lot. I can totally relate you know been there, done that. I think that it had a great story behind it. Wonderfully said.
    God Bless, Dawn
    | Posted on 2005-09-07 00:00:00 | by Dawnyd | [ Reply to This ]
      This is just beautiful!
    I really like how its sort of sing song, and its very meaningful, talking about the symbolism of the rose, and how it stands for love..

    Usually love poems make me embarrassed, cos I dont like sappy..but theres no way this is sappy. lol.

    The ending is just lovely, perfect sense of closure. I really enjoy this. Indeed, people nowadays just give flowers like its a common occurence, back in the day, it was like a huge meaningful token of love.

    Who knows, with poems like this one, maybe it'll be that way again.

    thanks for the read!

    alexis

    p.s. welcome to ES! :)
    | Posted on 2005-07-31 00:00:00 | by pennyroyal tea | [ Reply to This ]
      That was one of the simplest,yet most meaningful works i've ever read! great job,its simple but every bit of it was just awesome ^_^ i've never looked at a rose that way until now. Really nice poem *thumbs up*
    | Posted on 2005-07-31 00:00:00 | by Fallen One | [ Reply to This ]
      i really like this and i agree with every word of it. the meaning of a rose it much deeper than people see it now. its was a really pretty poem. great job. its a fave. =]
    | Posted on 2005-07-30 00:00:00 | by wastedROMANCEx | [ Reply to This ]
      Amber was right the poem was great. I really felt this one. Very good. i can really relate to this. I cant wait to see more work from you.
    | Posted on 2005-07-28 00:00:00 | by DrkRomeo_sGirl | [ Reply to This ]
      i like how every line didnt have to rhyme.. it would have lost its beauty if you did that.. i think that this was a really good poem. i agree with everyword of it.. i love how you looked at something so simple and gave us an intresting view at it.. it is akin to seeing something under a microscope and then realizing that there is more to something than what is seen by the naked eye.. nice picture by the way.. i have a hat like that
    ~*~amber~*~
    | Posted on 2005-07-28 00:00:00 | by rocknpoetrychik | [ Reply to This ]
      Now this...this...well...it just took me back ohh say seven years to when I first dated my ex husband. everyday I got a rose...it's just a shame the love wilted like the roses bloom...but as you said "Because you will someday meet,
    The only person that you feel,
    Could make your life complete."

    I hope you're right kid ;)
    | Posted on 2005-08-03 00:00:00 | by Brownsdelight | [ Reply to This ]


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