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    dots Submission Name: Photograph’s And Memoriesdots

    Author: layDsayD
    ASL Info:    29/f/florida
    Elite Ratio:    3.16 - 264/243/147
    Words: 87
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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       aghh the age old story man loves you then leaves again and again and again my sister wrote this and had me edit it a bit i loved it and thought it could be realated to by alot of people so let me know what you think and thanks to all who have commited on her work when you starting out it helps thank you

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    dotsPhotograph’s And Memoriesdots

    Photograph’s and memories are all I have left of you.
    In dusty frames and fading thoughts your slipping out of view.
    You’ve always stumbled on your words, and the promises un kept .
    Filling my heart with empty lies, then leaving without regret.
    Though I know you’ll come back
    in the morning Ill find you gone,
    But your photograph’s and memories forever linger on .

    BY: Shawna Price

    Submitted on 2005-07-28 18:02:59     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      ooh this is nice is this the first poem tha tshe written or the first shes submitted ne way no matter i stil liked it tell her to keep on writting

    | Posted on 2005-07-28 00:00:00 | by luvy | [ Reply to This ]
      This is a really good poem. I give your sister prompts for writting it. Its short but yet says so much in little words it is really good. Tell your sister keep up the good work.

    | Posted on 2005-07-28 00:00:00 | by POETRY | [ Reply to This ]
      This was cool, and it touches you man and that makes it awesome...you were right...I think a lot of people really can relate to this...

    Photographs and Memories man
    Hell yea
    | Posted on 2005-07-29 00:00:00 | by lori_tab | [ Reply to This ]

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