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    dots Submission Name: Empty Rocking Chairdots
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    Author: melancholystar
    ASL Info:    17/f/tx
    Elite Ratio:    4.53 - 598/302/32
    Words: 148
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 261
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    Description:
       For my grandmother... suffering from Dementia and possibly even Alzheimer's. I visited her this summer and she has gotten worse. For as long as I can remember she has had Dementia so I never really knew who she was before then... but even though I'll probably never know.. I still love her. :)


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    She means well,
    When she shuffles around the corner,
    For the tenth time,
    Telling me there’s an extra blanket,
    If I get cold in the night.

    I know she can’t help it,
    When her poor hunched figure,
    Is sitting next to me,
    And she can’t remember who I am,
    Or that we’ve had this conversation,
    Several times before.

    She’s now quick to anger,
    And to spit out hurtful words,
    Though she really is kind,
    Sometimes she forgets.

    I will always be patient with her,
    And smile when she asks me,
    The same questions repeatedly,
    It’s easy for me to pretend,
    I’d never answered them before.

    She may not always know who I am,
    For time has stolen her once brilliant mind,
    But I will never stop loving her,
    Even when the wind gently blows,
    A small empty rocking chair,
    Gracefully with its’ breath.




    Submitted on 2005-07-28 19:34:34     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      That was wonderful. I'm sorry that that is what your grandmother has to go through. You put it into words so seemingly easily that I don't really have a way to explain it. The flow was steady, almost lazy through the thought.

    You are a very good writer. You can express your ideas very clearly, and how you feel. Great job.

    I wish we had a cure for such diseases...they hurt us so...
    | Posted on 2005-07-28 00:00:00 | by Celeste J. Bell | [ Reply to This ]
      You wrote this poem very well. It's terrible that people succumb to such diseases. I don't know anyone personally that has suffered from dementia or alzheimer's disease. I truly think that it is probably one of the worst things that could happen to someone.

    I could clearly imagine an empty rocking chair rocking back and forth in a solemn air. I don't think that anything could be improved on this one. Very well done.
    | Posted on 2005-08-01 00:00:00 | by Ravenwood | [ Reply to This ]



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