Lake Laced With Diamonds by melancholystar

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Submission Name: Lake Laced With Diamonds dots

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Author:	melancholystar
ASL Info:	17/f/tx
Elite Ratio:	4.53 - 598/302/32
Words:	62

Class/Type:	Poetry/Nature
Total Views:	253
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	388

Description:
This is what I saw when I looked upon Lake Erie on a bright sunny day... and then later when night was arriving. I thought it was beautiful and enchanting. :)

Lake Laced With Diamonds dots

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Thousands of sparkling diamonds,
Glimmering for an instant,
Then fading from this world.

The sun setting over the lake,
Creating a single path of jewels,
And a painting in the sky.

Every imaginable color,
Is perfectly flawless,
Until the darkness of night,
Spills its’ black paint over day.

Submitted on 2005-07-28 19:39:11 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  This is a lovely poem that captures this moment in time. You have given wonderful imagery and descriptions that really allow the reader to visualize this in their mind and it is indeed a beautiful one. Very nicely written and expressed and I dont see anything here I would recommend you change. Just lovely. Take care.

Lorna
| Posted on 2005-11-21 00:00:00 | by lmz | [ Reply to This ]
  very pretty.. beautiful images of sparkling on the water and all the colours.. then fade to black for night. effective minimalist piece, yeah!
peace&diamonds
@ Cat
| Posted on 2005-07-29 00:00:00 | by magnicat | [ Reply to This ]
  this was beautiful but the perfectly flawless part is a bit redundant. I really wish more people could appreciate the beauty in nature as we do friend. thank you.
| Posted on 2005-07-28 00:00:00 | by dawnschild | [ Reply to This ]
  Short. . but sometimes I believe that is what makes some poems so worth while. It had Excellent imagination. A lake of diamonds... must be beautiful, Lol.. But, its weird hearing its over lake "erie".. Very beautiful!
| Posted on 2005-07-28 00:00:00 | by Blindly-N-Love | [ Reply to This ]
  i really liked this. wonderful imagery and interesting to hear what other people see in a sight that's very common for me. i live next to lake erie, and while it is beautiful, i think the ocean is so much more so. i saw that you live in texas, so i'm guessing you were just visiting?
let me know and again, great job on this poem.
| Posted on 2005-07-28 00:00:00 | by aliciaflower04 | [ Reply to This ]

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