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    dots Submission Name: " I Thought"dots
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    Author: DrkRomeo_sGirl
    ASL Info:    16/f/somewhere in my mind
    Elite Ratio:    2.97 - 77/75/26
    Words: 190
    Class/Type: Misc/Angry
    Total Views: 1523
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1166



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       Just be hones on how you feel about this poem.


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    dots" I Thought"dots
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    I thougth i had a best friend,
    That not even money could buy,
    But if you dig a little deeper,
    You'd under stand why.
    Me and you aren't you ever gonna be coll,
    Anymore, you took my reputaion,
    And through it right out the door,
    And you ain't in my shoes,
    And if you only knew how i feel.
    Would you even stop to realize,
    That i have pain and its real.
    All those liesyou told ,
    And all that didrt you spread,
    You turned my life too stone,
    And got me wishing i was dead.
    Why are you acting,
    Like the world revolves around you,
    All this time you were a fake never real or true.
    How could you do this to me,
    You'd say we'd be friends till' the end.
    Theres no turning back,
    you'll never win back this friend.
    People are looking at me different,
    And its all because of you,
    When all i ever did,
    Was try to be friends with you.
    I got feelings,
    Yeah,
    And i'm trying to live a life too,
    SO the last thing I need is a SCEW-Up like you.




    Submitted on 2005-07-28 20:35:34     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      JESSICA C. IS A FUCCING BITCH ASS WHORE SHE WILL [censored]ING BURN
    [censored]ING CUNT!!!!!!!!
    SHE'S GOING DOWN............
    YOU GO SHORTE
    WAIT TIL I C THAT BITCH
    .....................I'M GONNA CUT 'ER.
    [censored]ING FAKE BITCH
    ( i could do this all day)
    | Posted on 2007-02-06 00:00:00 | by XmaryjaneX | [ Reply to This ]
      that was really good and i think everyone has had a friend betray them once in their life and i can say i can relate well anyways keep up the good work


    Love, Serenity Blade
    | Posted on 2005-07-29 00:00:00 | by Demon__666 | [ Reply to This ]


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