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    dots Submission Name: Sign Languagedots
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    Author: rws
    ASL Info:    58/m/ohio
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 2779/1297/258
    Words: 37
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 599
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 265



    Description:
       Just another meditation on love.


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    dotsSign Languagedots
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    Fingertips race to taste
    the pleasure of your flesh
    the sweet geography
    my eyes and I caress
    hold me close
    until the curvature
    of our dark distress
    melt into me softly;
    my words are
    meaningless




    Submitted on 2005-07-28 21:03:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I realize this is old (shit, almost ten years now), but I thought I'd leave a comment anyway, despite not having much to say.

    Everything about this is bare--the rhyme is delicate and understated, the language as a whole is economical, and even that beautiful, solitary semi-colon stands alone.

    In all, this is the perfect snapshot, like a polaroid while your lover sleeps.
    | Posted on 2015-03-25 00:00:00 | by etheror | [ Reply to This ]
      with such power and soul anything is possible- please continue writing, you are very talented and I love you. This was so eloquently written and sensual- it's been a really long time since I have read anything that was able to turn me on...ummm...inspire me :)
    | Posted on 2005-07-28 00:00:00 | by dawnschild | [ Reply to This ]


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