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Submission Name: Abreast about Breasts dots

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Author:	rocknpoetrychik
ASL Info:	20/Female/Someplace
Elite Ratio:	4.06 - 331/281/44
Words:	139

Class/Type:	Poetry/Comedy
Total Views:	304
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	886

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sorry.. i got carried away.. it has a stop and go rhyme scheme to it.. not all parts rhyme and im aware. but how boring to ALWAYS make every line rhyme.. sorry if the language is harsh to anyone.. it is just something im used to.. anyhow.. you can like it or not. but i was just looking down at my boobs and going .. damn you .. stop coming out of my shirt! so then this popped into my head.. anyhow enjoy or not.. i dont care:)

Abreast about Breasts dots

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Funbags,
Hooters,
These are mine and you have a mushroom shooter!
Pussy,
Cunt,
These are mine and I won't front!
Breasts that crawl out of their bra,
I just bought this!
It cant be!
Why is nature doing this to me?
A "C" cup in the 4th,
Now 20 and still they grow!
I can't afford what they require!
Fuck it I'm setting all my bras on fire!
Big bonfire of liberation,
I will even make a jock strap incineration!
Thats right guys, step right up!
Free! Today you can burn that cup!
Who am I fooling?
Myself I can see,
I love the lace,
I love the support,
I need a reward for being a good sport,
I carry these around because you like to feel,
Plus one day they will make a baby a good meal!

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  That is so cool! I love this poem! It flowed just right, back and forth. Tempo was good, I love the message. We all get fed up with wearing a bra, and sometimes, lately, I think, "My God! I will be wearing one of these until I die!" It only discourages, but then I pick up a Vicky (Victoria's Secret) and think, "Wow, that is so cute, I must have!" A sick and deranged form of self punishment. I must be a masocist!

Great read...

Indigo Kid
| Posted on 2005-07-30 00:00:00 | by Indigo Kid | [ Reply to This ]
  lol this was the funniest poem i have read in a good month or two. this totally reminds me of what my girl freind is going through she has gone from a c to dd iand she hates it lol. she has many problems with it so i try and help with it as much as i can.
this was a good poem made me feel sorry for girl s that dont seem to like there bodies growth.
Ace
| Posted on 2005-07-29 00:00:00 | by Ace | [ Reply to This ]
  Well this upfront and in your face, oops- I wish :) Bold and sassy - I loved it! You really gave me a good laugh and a little tit-alation!
Read Lainie's poem Welcome to your future! :)

Nice write really enjoyed it!

Steve
| Posted on 2005-07-29 00:00:00 | by SHRINKSDR | [ Reply to This ]
  I am still laughing my ace off! Amber you are too creative and real sometimes it cause me to laugh so hard my tampon almost popped out! Opps did I say that?! He, he! I hate bras too! We are sisters and our boobs just dont stop do they! If they get any bigger I wont be able to buy Victorias Secret bras anymore. That would require a funeral for all of my boulder holders! Love you!

*Amanda*
| Posted on 2005-07-29 00:00:00 | by fortressofwords | [ Reply to This ]
  what harsh language? i liked it. i like big boobs, i like vaginas; WHO KNEW? LMAO. this is just an honest review from a horny high school kid who loves female body parts. i'd be one of the guys setting all his old jock straps on fire. every few minute i have to buy a new one cuz it just keeps gettin bigger and then smaller then bigger, etc. etc. its all good tho. nice work, and i dig the lolly pop pic.~nahlij
| Posted on 2005-07-29 00:00:00 | by Aknahlij_d 1 | [ Reply to This ]
  Ya know, I dont see how you women walk around with those things sometimes...but I am glad that you have them, hee-hee. This was funny as hell...an interesting laughable write. Heck, if ya cant make fun of yourself, who can you make fun about, ya know? I have been contemplating a comedy about "my other mind" for a while now...but thats a delicate subject, HA! This though, was an excellent write...like a sore d*ck...cant beat it! Have a good one and keep smilin'
| Posted on 2005-07-29 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]
  Don't hold back now ,LOL , Tell us how you really feel !Open honest and dead on .
A true speak out of self expression.There is no critique for this that i could even dream of ! Thanks !
JON
| Posted on 2005-07-29 00:00:00 | by poppa jon | [ Reply to This ]
  I found this a riot! The fact that you openly spoke of such things is a credit to your self confidence. The language was strong but it helped the piece, not hurt it. Good stuff. Smiles
| Posted on 2005-07-29 00:00:00 | by Traveller | [ Reply to This ]
  hello , this was very funny and i needed a laugh , we both think alike as i have written a poem on the same subject , although since i'm older its more of a why are they falling down lol
great job
take care
Lainie x
| Posted on 2005-07-29 00:00:00 | by lainie75 | [ Reply to This ]
  I liked the fearlessness in this piece. Alot of people have thoughts and are afraid to express them for fear of scorn or what ever others may think. But, if the pieces we write aren't honest, what are they? The rhyme in this was good, and I thought it humerus. Nice work, stay honest, stay fearless.
| Posted on 2005-07-29 00:00:00 | by Malcolm Bishop | [ Reply to This ]
  Well I see what you mean about the language. But then I come from a different generation. But this is a very fun and clever piece of work. And it's so original and unashamed if you know what I mean. I really like it naughty language and all. :) Well done.
Bill
| Posted on 2005-07-29 00:00:00 | by rankamateur | [ Reply to This ]

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