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    dots Submission Name: Haikudots
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    Author: CleoCollier
    ASL Info:    40/F/South
    Elite Ratio:    4.44 - 83/84/26
    Words: 10
    Class/Type: Haiku/Misc
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    Bytes: 86



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       Another one from the road in TN. Can u guess YET?


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    dotsHaikudots
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    Mother Earth Muscle
    Conceit of man's industry
    She feigns indulgence




    Submitted on 2005-07-29 16:13:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this is my interpretation:

    chicken and peas
    i really hate peas
    then why did i say chicken and peas?

    thank you for your time.
    ~agz
    | Posted on 2005-07-30 00:00:00 | by irish_fairy1018 | [ Reply to This ]
      Mother Earth Muscle = water? I am not sure, it makes sense to me as that is the only thing besides an earth quake that would still more and flow easily regardless of mans conciet. A river perhaps?

    Indigo
    | Posted on 2005-07-29 00:00:00 | by Indigo Kid | [ Reply to This ]
      hmmm.. intriguing.. hmm.. this could be a few things.. i need to think about it.. but man you go with your haikus.. i miss people doing these.. thanks for being so refreshing and posting some haikus!
    ~*~amber~*~
    | Posted on 2005-07-29 00:00:00 | by rocknpoetrychik | [ Reply to This ]
      Or wait, maybe its trees, trees could work also... hm I'm stumped here... I think its either a car or trees. Knowing me its probably neither!lol
    ~Kelly~
    | Posted on 2005-07-29 00:00:00 | by MurphyGirl44 | [ Reply to This ]
      Hm, I might be wrong and probably be am, but my guess is a car... Mother earthe muscle=gas
    Conceit of mans industry=definatley a car but I'm not sure about the last line. Heh very nice Haiku!
    ~Kelly~
    | Posted on 2005-07-29 00:00:00 | by MurphyGirl44 | [ Reply to This ]
      HA! Another one, eh? Well the clues are getting more transparent...but still aint gonna attempt to pin it down...hee-hee. If it is what I think it is, well it is very natural and insightful...nice job on the two haikus (bless u). Have a good one and keep smilin'
    | Posted on 2005-07-29 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]
      Oh this is so good for so many reasons. The ego of men, the history of women and their subservience, a subservience that is but a manipulation to have the real power without having to go to the mat with testosterone. At least, that's what I got out of it. I loved it.
    Ashley
    | Posted on 2005-08-24 00:00:00 | by queendepricate | [ Reply to This ]


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