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    dots Submission Name: GOBBLYGOOKdots

    Author: BenCollier
    Elite Ratio:    3.72 - 425/386/88
    Words: 17
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       We have these words on magnets that we put on our fridge all jumbled up.. Every so often we put words together to make sentences. This is one of those. It is not intended to make a powerful impacting statement, just GOBBLYGOOK.

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    True men who shine
    Harsh eden reflected
    On magic blood
    Sanctuary from
    Delirous peace

    Submitted on 2005-07-29 16:16:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      huh. i actually understand it.
    thats like a big thing for me.
    | Posted on 2007-02-05 00:00:00 | by XmaryjaneX | [ Reply to This ]
      what? i can't comment on a poem i don't understand..was that a mistake, 'eden'?
    i can't say it's bad though, i just don't get it...
    | Posted on 2005-11-05 00:00:00 | by Avril54 | [ Reply to This ]
      I am sure that somewhere in here there is a message that I should get or something of the type. Maybe I am too young to understand. I liked the flow and stuff though. Keep on writing.
    | Posted on 2006-07-07 00:00:00 | by Caotic_Disaster | [ Reply to This ]
      Well good job then...I am listening to Janis Joplin and I think that's cool man...everything feels like it makes more of an impact when you listen to Janis Joplin...so this [censored] is deep man...and peace to you.


    Oh and me and my sis use to leave silly messages on my refrigerator with the letters...but we would always lose some letters so we would have to make nonesense words...funny eh.
    | Posted on 2005-07-29 00:00:00 | by lori_tab | [ Reply to This ]
      When I saw the title I thought somehow you'd been subject to my cooking! he he he
    I love those magnets and it's fun to see what you can come up with.
    I enjoyed this minimalistic piece and it was not gobblygook but very poetic and mysterious.
    Great job! Love,Peace,Joy! tif ; - } Happy Weekend!
    | Posted on 2005-07-29 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]

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