Description: Before I'm crucified for blasphemy, let me assure you this isn't a bendiction or blessing of lust. It has to do with the conflict between flesh, spirit and the erroneous belief that sex in every form is evil. Within marriage to the right person, it can be joyous. Balance between physical and spritual love is the key to satisfying both halves of the planet.
The Apostle's Erection -------------------------------------------
The wonders of
an agony throbbing
at the bases
of their souls
required a repentance
unknown to them
foreign to such
self control
As feet rush to follow
after them
all their desires bundled
into twine
risen with ascendant
hunger
made them wish
they were divine
All the pleasures
they abhored
that seemed to make
the angels sob
cause grown men
to smile
at the feet
of other gods
This is really good. The struggle between what we desire for bliss, and what we desire for true happiness. Sex within marriage is perfect, not that I know from experience, but it's what I believe. Anyway, I don't think there's anything wrong with this, however, the title is misleading.
oh wow.. this was simply wonderful.. i enjoyed reading this so much and i have no critique to give you because you shouldnt change a thing! ~*~amber~*~
Submission Name: The Apostle's Erection
