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    dots Submission Name: The Apostle's Erectiondots
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    Author: rws
    ASL Info:    57/m/ohio
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 2777/1297/258
    Words: 79
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 1018
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    Bytes: 596



    Description:
       Before I'm crucified for blasphemy, let me assure you this isn't a bendiction or blessing of lust. It has to do with the conflict between flesh, spirit and the erroneous belief that sex in every form is evil. Within marriage to the right person, it can be joyous. Balance between physical and spritual love is the key to satisfying both halves of the planet.


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    dotsThe Apostle's Erectiondots
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    The wonders of
    an agony throbbing
    at the bases
    of their souls
    required a repentance
    unknown to them
    foreign to such
    self control

    As feet rush to follow
    after them
    all their desires bundled
    into twine
    risen with ascendant
    hunger
    made them wish
    they were divine

    All the pleasures
    they abhored
    that seemed to make
    the angels sob
    cause grown men
    to smile
    at the feet
    of other gods








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      This is really good. The struggle between what we desire for bliss, and what we desire for true happiness. Sex within marriage is perfect, not that I know from experience, but it's what I believe. Anyway, I don't think there's anything wrong with this, however, the title is misleading.
    | Posted on 2005-07-29 00:00:00 | by AngelOutlaw | [ Reply to This ]
      oh wow.. this was simply wonderful.. i enjoyed reading this so much and i have no critique to give you because you shouldnt change a thing!
    ~*~amber~*~
    | Posted on 2005-07-29 00:00:00 | by rocknpoetrychik | [ Reply to This ]


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