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    Author: layDsayD
    ASL Info:    29/f/florida
    Elite Ratio:    3.16 - 264/243/147
    Words: 58
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 668
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       this is one is so old im going thtrough old work to try to get as much as i can into my book i remember this time 99 i think as being very dark filled with drug and drink i suffered a terrible loss and even writing was hard thats what this refferrs to


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    Ugly filtered doorway.
    Perhaps my mind has finally gone insane.
    I fear this pen will not stop writing .
    I fear the blood will begin clotting.
    The door may close on me again.
    The world may run out of paper before Iím done.
    I love the smell of ink .
    At least thereís that .




    Submitted on 2005-07-29 21:46:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      that was good. it sounded tight. i really can't say that i understand it as well as i want 2, but i can understand why u luv the smell of ink. good right.
    | Posted on 2005-07-30 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]


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