I dont know how I feel about this piece. The first and third stanza were both good, but you lost me on the second one. I guess it was the wording of it, but after rereading it four times, outloud, I still couldn't make heads or tails out of anything past the second line. Maybe I am just to tired... Anyhow, do you think you could jsut tell me the jist of that verse? I would like to read the piece again, once I know what I am reading, and then maybe recomment.